List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by directly answering the question and providing specific reasons. Avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. Making a list helps me remember exactly what I need to buy, such as groceries, clothes, or jewelry.

제안: Your answer is confusing and contains unclear phrases. Focus on directly answering the question with clear and simple sentences. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically and provide specific details about how the list helps you at work.

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work because I often forget tasks. It helps me keep track of what I have completed and what still needs to be done, especially urgent tasks. This method works well for me.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains irrelevant or incorrect phrases. Try to give a clear and logical explanation using simple language. Provide specific reasons why some people might avoid making lists.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory or feel that lists are unnecessary. They might find it easier to remember tasks without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is generally clear but can be improved by avoiding repetition and using more natural phrasing. Try to make your sentences concise and use linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can easily access my list anytime and anywhere without worrying about forgetting it.

× I go to the shopping because the end the person who don't memorize the thing very well and I forgot each and everything very immediately.

✓ I go shopping because I am the kind of person who doesn't memorize things very well and I forget everything very quickly.

The original sentence has subject-verb agreement errors such as 'person who don't' which should be 'person who doesn't' because 'person' is singular. Also, 'forgot' should be 'forget' to match the present tense context. Additionally, 'the shopping' is incorrect; 'go shopping' is the correct phrase. The phrase 'each and everything very immediately' is awkward; 'everything very quickly' is more natural.

× So it is very efficient for me to make a list for a shop like what to what to buy like grocery things or clothes or jewelry.

✓ So it is very efficient for me to make a shopping list of what to buy, like groceries, clothes, or jewelry.

The phrase 'a list for a shop like what to what to buy like grocery things' is awkward and contains redundant words. 'Grocery things' is better expressed as 'groceries'. The sentence is restructured for clarity and naturalness.

× Yes, I make a list of formed by the world, because as I mentioned above, that I cannot remember each and everything well quickly.

✓ Yes, I make a list for work because, as I mentioned above, I cannot remember everything well or quickly.

The phrase 'a list of formed by the world' is unclear and likely a mishearing or misstatement. It is corrected to 'a list for work' to fit the context. 'Each and everything' is redundant; 'everything' suffices. The phrase 'well quickly' is awkward; 'well or quickly' is clearer.

× So I make a list that this much work is remembering to do and that work is remaining to do and I also have to do as soon as possible.

✓ So I make a list of tasks to remember, what work remains to be done, and what I have to do as soon as possible.

The original sentence is awkward and unclear. 'This much work is remembering to do' is incorrect; it is better expressed as 'tasks to remember'. 'That work is remaining to do' is rephrased as 'what work remains to be done' for clarity.

× That works, so it also works for me.

✓ That works, so it is effective for me as well.

The phrase 'That works, so it also works for me' is repetitive. Replacing the second 'works' with 'is effective' improves clarity and style.

× ICICI Lombard people don't like to make a list because it depends on them, they cannot support it very immediately or they are good in normalization.

✓ Some people don't like to make lists because it depends on them; they may not be able to do it quickly or they are good at remembering things naturally.

'ICICI Lombard people' is unclear and likely a misstatement; replaced with 'Some people'. 'It depends on them' is vague; clarified as 'it depends on them'. 'Cannot support it very immediately' is incorrect; replaced with 'may not be able to do it quickly'. 'Good in normalization' is unclear; replaced with 'good at remembering things naturally'.

× So they think that the thing that it is useless for them to make a list.

✓ So they think that making a list is useless for them.

The original sentence is awkward and redundant. Simplifying to 'making a list is useless for them' improves clarity.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because whenever I go to a somewhere, I take my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because whenever I go somewhere, I take my phone with me.

The phrase 'go to a somewhere' is incorrect; 'go somewhere' is correct. Also, 'take my phone' is incomplete; 'take my phone with me' is more natural.

× I take a phone, my phone with me, so it is very easy for me to just open it and just see the list.

✓ I take my phone with me, so it is very easy for me to just open it and see the list.

The phrase 'I take a phone, my phone with me' is redundant and awkward. Simplifying to 'I take my phone with me' is clearer and grammatically correct.