List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在重复词汇“yeah”，显得不够自然。句子结构较为混乱，表达不够清晰，建议简化句子并使用更准确的词汇。可以增加连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list. When I was younger, I didn't do this because I liked to shop freely. However, now I make lists to avoid forgetting items when I return home.

제안: 回答不够清晰，语法错误较多，表达混乱，难以理解。建议使用简单明了的句子直接回答问题，并补充具体细节。

예시: I used to make lists for my work when I was younger, but now I don't. I find that making lists for work is less helpful for me.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的句子结构，避免重复，增加连接词使表达更自然。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they feel restricted. They prefer to do things freely rather than following a strict order.

제안: 回答中表达不够清晰，有语法和用词错误。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好，并说明原因。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because nowadays, most things are done online, and it's more convenient than using paper.

× When I was young, actually, I didn't make this because I prefer to shop liberally, but now I have to make this because I always forget some things when I come back home.

✓ When I was young, actually, I didn't make this because I preferred to shop liberally, but now I have to make this because I always forget some things when I come back home.

这里的时间是过去，所以动词应该用过去式。'prefer' 应该改为 'preferred'，表示过去的习惯。

× The situation of a list for work is entirely opposite. To for shopping, because when I was younger I didn't.

✓ The situation of a list for work is entirely opposite. For shopping, when I was younger I didn't.

介词使用错误，'To for shopping' 应改为 'For shopping'，表示针对购物的情况。

× I always make this, but now I didn't, I don't.

✓ I always made this, but now I don't.

这里描述过去的习惯，应该用过去式 'made'，而现在的情况用现在时 'don't'。

× Maybe they don't like something limiting them because if you have a list you have to follow it and do the things one by one, but someone like do the things freely and don't have any.

✓ Maybe they don't like something limiting them because if you have a list you have to follow it and do the things one by one, but some people like to do things freely and don't have any.

'someone like do' 语法错误，应改为 'some people like to do'，'some people' 是复数，'like' 后应接动词不定式。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because now there is no paper word, I mean a paper or do almost all the things online and I have to do a list on my phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because now there is no paper word, I mean paper, and I do almost all things online, so I have to make a list on my phone.

'do almost all the things online' 中 'do' 用法不当，应改为 'do almost all things online'，且 'a list' 前应使用 'make' 而非 'do'。