List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but could be more natural and concise. Avoid redundancy such as "I do need at least to remind me" which is unclear. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and provide more specific details about how the list helps you.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because supermarkets have a wide variety of products. This helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves time while shopping.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains some grammatical errors and could be more coherent. Use linking words like 'because' or 'so' to connect ideas. Also, be careful with verb tenses and plural forms. Try to give a clearer explanation of how the list improves your work.

예시: Yes, I always start my work by making a list because it helps me remember the order of tasks. This makes me work more effectively and saves a lot of time.

제안: Your answer attempts to explain reasons but is somewhat unclear and contains awkward phrasing. Avoid redundancy like 'other some other people' and improve sentence structure. Use linking words such as 'firstly' and 'secondly' correctly and provide clearer, more specific reasons.

예시: Well, firstly, some people already have a clear plan in their minds, so they don't need a list to remember things. Secondly, others might find lists stressful because they feel pressured by the tasks and deadlines.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more fluent and natural. Avoid repetition and unclear phrases like 'check a little' or 'some tests'. Use linking words to contrast ideas clearly and provide specific examples of distractions.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can see them easily on the wall by my desk. In contrast, using my phone can be distracting since notifications and messages often interrupt me.

× I usually go shopping in the supermarket and there are a wide variety of products there.

✓ I usually go shopping in the supermarket and there is a wide variety of products there.

The phrase 'a wide variety' is singular, so the verb should be 'is' instead of 'are' to agree in number.

× So I do need at least to remind me of what I need to buy and it's really helpful on the way all the time.

✓ So I do need at least a reminder of what I need to buy and it's really helpful on the way all the time.

The phrase 'need at least to remind me' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'need at least a reminder' to properly use the quantifier and noun form.

× It's really helpful, it's made me work more effectively and it helped me to remember the order of the task that I need to do.

✓ It's really helpful, it has made me work more effectively and it has helped me to remember the order of the tasks that I need to do.

The present perfect tense ('has made', 'has helped') is appropriate here to indicate actions that have relevance to the present. Also, 'task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context.

× It save a lot of time.

✓ It saves a lot of time.

The subject 'It' is singular, so the verb should be 'saves' to agree in number.

× Firstly they already have a clear plan in the head so they don't need at least to help them to remember things.

✓ Firstly, they already have a clear plan in their head so they don't need help to remember things.

The phrase 'don't need at least to help them' is incorrect. The correct form is 'don't need help' and 'in their head' is the correct possessive form.

× Secondly, other some other people feel might feel stressful when they have a list, it's pushed them more in time and task so they don't like that.

✓ Secondly, some other people might feel stressed when they have a list; it pushes them more in terms of time and tasks, so they don't like that.

The phrase 'feel might feel stressful' is incorrect; 'might feel stressed' is correct. Also, 'it's pushed them' should be 'it pushes them' to agree with the subject and tense. 'More in time and task' is unclear; 'more in terms of time and tasks' is clearer.

× On the other hand, the phone can be distracted sometimes when, for example, when I check a little, maybe some tests or messages on the phone will distract me.

✓ On the other hand, the phone can be distracting sometimes; for example, when I check a little, maybe some texts or messages on the phone will distract me.

The verb 'be distracted' is incorrect here; 'be distracting' is correct to describe the phone causing distraction. Also, 'tests' should be 'texts'.