List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid repetition and grammatical errors. Use linking words like 'because' and 'so' correctly to connect ideas smoothly. Also, keep your sentences concise and check subject-verb agreement.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me remember everything I need for my home. Sometimes, I tend to forget items, so having a list keeps me organized and saves time. Overall, it makes shopping much easier and less stressful.

제안: Clarify your answer by using correct grammar and avoid repeating words. Use linking words like 'because' to explain reasons clearly. Also, try to expand your answer with specific details.

예시: Actually, I am still a student, so if you mean study work, yes, I do make lists because they help me organize my main tasks and improve my studying efficiency.

제안: Your answer is unclear and lacks coherence. Try to give a clear opinion and support it with reasons. Use linking words to connect your ideas logically.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it time-consuming or feel it limits their flexibility. Additionally, they may prefer to remember things naturally rather than relying on written notes.

제안: Complete your sentences and avoid abrupt endings. Use linking words to explain your preference clearly. Also, try to give specific reasons and examples.

예시: Actually, I prefer making lists on paper because when I use my phone, I get distracted by videos on YouTube or TikTok and forget the list. Therefore, paper helps me stay focused and organized.

× Sometime I tend to forget items so having a list keep me organized and save time.

✓ Sometimes I tend to forget items so having a list keeps me organized and saves time.

The word 'Sometime' should be plural 'Sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'list' is singular, so the verb should be 'keeps' instead of 'keep' to agree with the singular subject. Similarly, 'save' should be 'saves' to agree with 'list'.

× Overall, it's make shopping much easier and less stressful.

✓ Overall, it makes shopping much easier and less stressful.

The phrase 'it's make' is incorrect; 'it's' is a contraction for 'it is' which should be followed by a verb in -ing form or an adjective. The correct verb form here is 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× Actually I'm still a student so if you mean work study, yes I do because it's helped me to organize my my primary things and help me studying better.

✓ Actually, I'm still a student, so if you mean work or study, yes I do because it has helped me to organize my primary things and helped me study better.

The phrase 'work study' is unclear and should be separated by 'or' to clarify meaning. 'It's helped' should be 'it has helped' for clarity. 'Help me studying' is incorrect; the verb 'help' should be followed by the base form 'study'. Also, repeated 'my' is a typo.

× People believe that let's help them organize their their important things to the last thing and helping him help them improve from the list is I don't know.

✓ People believe that lists help them organize their important things from the first to the last and help them improve, but I don't know.

The original sentence is confusing and ungrammatical. 'Let's' is incorrect here; it should be 'lists'. Repetition of 'their' is a typo. The phrase 'to the last thing and helping him help them improve from the list is I don't know' is unclear and needs restructuring for clarity.

× Actually I prefer it in a paper because the phone is like.

✓ Actually, I prefer it on paper because the phone is distracting.

The phrase 'in a paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper'. The sentence 'the phone is like' is incomplete and unclear; it should be completed to express the intended meaning, e.g., 'the phone is distracting'.

× When I use my phone, I actually watch video, YouTube, Tiktok and I don't remember the list.

✓ When I use my phone, I actually watch videos on YouTube and TikTok, and I don't remember the list.

'Video' should be plural 'videos'. 'YouTube' and 'TikTok' are proper nouns and should be capitalized. The sentence needs 'on' before 'YouTube' and 'TikTok' to indicate the platform. Also, a comma before 'and' improves readability.