List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but can be improved by using more natural phrasing and clearer sentence structure. Avoid redundancy and try to be more concise. For example, instead of 'At somehow I make a list', say 'I usually make a list'. Also, 'home equipment like my grocery' is unclear; you can say 'household items and groceries'.

예시: I usually make a list when I need to buy household items and groceries because I find it hard to remember everything without one.

제안: Your answer is a bit vague and repetitive. Try to give a direct response first, then explain with specific details. Avoid filler words like 'and that's all about it'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I sometimes make lists for work, especially when I have important tasks to remember. This method helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer is clear but can be improved by using more natural expressions and correct grammar. For example, say 'Some people prefer not to make lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily.' Also, avoid repeating similar words unnecessarily.

예시: Some people prefer not to make lists because they have a good memory and can remember their tasks without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is quite good but can be more concise and natural. Avoid repeating ideas and use linking words to connect sentences. For example, 'I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper and don't always have a pen handy. Therefore, I use the notes app to keep track of important things.'

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I often lose paper and don't always have a pen handy. Therefore, I use the notes app to keep track of important things.

× At somehow I make a list when I have to buy some home equipment like my grocery because I don't have any shop memory to remember these kinds of things.

✓ Somehow, I make a list when I have to buy some home equipment like groceries because I don't have the memory to remember these kinds of things.

The phrase 'At somehow' is incorrect; 'Somehow' alone is appropriate. Also, 'my grocery' should be 'groceries' as it refers to items, not a singular noun. 'Shop memory' is not a correct phrase; 'memory' alone suffices here.

× Sometimes people do not prefer to make lists because they have a sharp memory to remember their things properly, so they don't make list for remember.

✓ Sometimes people do not prefer to make lists because they have a sharp memory to remember their things properly, so they don't make lists to remember.

The phrase 'don't make list' is incorrect; it should be 'don't make lists' to agree in number. Also, 'for remember' is incorrect; the correct form is 'to remember' as an infinitive verb.

× Well, mostly I prefer to make list on my phone because sometimes the pen is not near with me and I lost the paper a lot of times.

✓ Well, mostly I prefer to make lists on my phone because sometimes the pen is not near me and I have lost the paper many times.

The phrase 'make list' should be 'make lists' to agree in number. 'Near with me' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'near me'. Also, 'I lost the paper a lot of times' should be 'I have lost the paper many times' to indicate repeated past actions relevant to the present.