List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，表达不够自然，且缺少连贯的连接词。建议加强语法基础，使用完整句子，并用连接词使表达更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me buy the things I need more conveniently.

제안: 回答语法混乱，表达不清晰，缺少逻辑连接词。建议练习使用简单句和连接词，明确表达因果关系。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work. It works well because without a list, I might forget to finish some tasks.

제안: 回答中有重复和语法错误，表达不自然。建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并用更准确的词汇表达观点。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory and can remember things easily.

제안: 回答不完整且语法错误较多，表达不连贯。建议使用完整句子，清楚说明理由，并使用连接词。

예시: I prefer to make lists on paper because I can easily see them, while I often forget to check lists on my phone.

× Yes, I always list when I shop because when I list shop I will convenient to buy some I want thing.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because when I make a list, shopping is convenient to buy some things I want.

这里“list”应使用复数形式“lists”或短语“make a list”，且“thing”应为复数“things”，因为指多个物品。

× Yes, I always list when I shop because when I list shop I will convenient to buy some I want thing.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop because when I make a list, shopping is convenient to buy some things I want.

句中缺少冠词“a”，应为“make a list”，表示制作一个清单。

× Yes, I list for my work it is good effect because if I don't lift I maybe don't do something finish if I have list I can do.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. It has a good effect because if I don't make a list, I may not finish something. If I have a list, I can do it.

句子结构混乱，缺少连接词和正确的动词形式，需拆分成多个句子并调整语序。

× Yes, I list for my work it is good effect because if I don't lift I maybe don't do something finish if I have list I can do.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work. It has a good effect because if I don't make a list, I may not finish something. If I have a list, I can do it.

“list”前应加冠词“a”，表示一个具体的清单。

× The don't Some people like making lists because they have a good memory, they they have a talent, they bring is smart and in the brain has a list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory, they have a talent, they are smart, and their brain already has a list.

句中“The don't Some people”顺序错误，应为“Some people don't”。另外，“they bring is smart”表达不正确，应为“they are smart”。

× The don't Some people like making lists because they have a good memory, they they have a talent, they bring is smart and in the brain has a list.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they have a good memory, they have a talent, they are smart, and their brain already has a list.

句子结构混乱，重复词语且表达不清晰，需调整语序和用词。

× I think list on paper is good. I always list on paper because the paper I can. I can look and in the phone I don't look.

✓ I think making a list on paper is good. I always make a list on paper because I can look at the paper, but I don't look at my phone.

“list”前应加冠词“a”，且“look”后应加介词“at”，表示查看。