List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some language errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'a app which is a nose'. Try to use correct articles and clearer vocabulary. Also, avoid redundancy by not repeating 'market' twice. Keep your answer concise and natural.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before going to the market. I usually use an app on my phone where I write down everything I need to buy.

제안: Your answer is relevant and mostly clear, but the sentence structure is a bit awkward, especially 'complete task on time for example'. Try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly and be more specific about how the list helps you.

예시: Yes, I usually make a timetable for my work, which is very useful because it helps me complete tasks on time. For example, by organising my day effectively, I can save time for other activities.

제안: Your answer addresses the question well but has some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as 'through the day throughout the'. Try to use more precise vocabulary and correct sentence endings. Also, use linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Well, in my country, some people don't like making lists because they have a strong memory and can remember everything easily. Therefore, they feel that writing things down is unnecessary and a waste of time, so they prefer to keep everything in their head throughout the day.

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but there are minor errors such as missing articles and awkward phrasing like 'to which make it easier'. Try to use linking words correctly and check grammar for smoother delivery.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and always with me. For example, I can quickly add or remove items whenever I need to, which makes it easier to stay organised. Plus, I don't have to worry about losing a piece of paper since my phone is always in my pocket.

× I usually use a app which is a nose and I write down everything which I need to buy from the market.

✓ I usually use an app which is called 'a nose' and I write down everything which I need to buy from the market.

The article 'a' should be 'an' before a vowel sound, such as in 'app'. Also, the phrase 'which is a nose' is unclear and likely a mishearing or typo; it should be 'which is called "a nose"' to clarify the app's name.

× I usually make a list for my work like a timetable, which is very useful because it helps me complete task on time for example, or by organizing my day.

✓ I usually make a list for my work like a timetable, which is very useful because it helps me complete tasks on time, for example, by organizing my day.

The word 'task' should be plural 'tasks' because it refers to multiple tasks. Also, the phrase 'for example' should be set off by commas and connected properly to the sentence.

× They often feel that writing things down is unnecessary and a waste of time, so they usually keep everything in their head through the day throughout the.

✓ They often feel that writing things down is unnecessary and a waste of time, so they usually keep everything in their head throughout the day.

The phrase 'through the day throughout the' is redundant and incomplete. The correct preposition is 'throughout the day' to indicate the entire duration of the day.

× I prefer to make list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and always with me.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and always with me.

The noun 'list' is singular and requires the indefinite article 'a' before it.

× For example, I can quickly add or remove items whenever I need to, to which make it easier to stay organized.

✓ For example, I can quickly add or remove items whenever I need to, which makes it easier to stay organized.

The phrase 'to which make it easier' is incorrect. It should be 'which makes it easier' to correctly connect the clause and agree in number with the singular subject 'which'.