List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is understandable but contains grammatical errors and some redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and clear by limiting it to 3-4 sentences. For example, say "I make a list when I go shopping because I often forget what I need to buy for my home."

예시: I usually make a list before shopping because it helps me remember the items I need for my home. This way, I avoid forgetting important things and save time while shopping.

제안: Your answer is relevant but has some grammatical mistakes and repetition. Use singular/plural forms correctly and avoid repeating words. Also, try to add linking words to make your answer more coherent. For example, "Yes, I usually make a list before starting my work because it helps me organize my tasks for the day."

예시: Yes, I usually prepare a list before starting my work because it helps me prioritize my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains many grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas clearly and complete your sentences. Avoid incomplete thoughts and provide specific reasons. For example, "Some people don't like making lists because they believe it doesn't help them stay organized. For instance, my mom prefers to remember things without writing them down."

예시: Some people avoid making lists because they feel it is unnecessary or time-consuming. For example, my mother usually doesn't make lists and prefers to rely on her memory instead.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and does not address the question. Always provide a full response with reasons or examples. For example, "I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit them."

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is more convenient and I can update the list anytime without losing it.

× Yes, I make a list when I go to the shop because sometimes I forgot what I should to buy and what I need for home or anything.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I go to the shop because sometimes I forget what I should buy and what I need for home or anything.

The verb 'forgot' is in the past tense, but the sentence context requires the present tense 'forget' to match the habitual action. Also, 'should to buy' is incorrect; 'should' is followed directly by the base verb without 'to'. Use 'should buy' instead.

× That's why I make a list when I go to the I go to for shop.

✓ That's why I make a list when I go to the shop.

The phrase 'I go to the I go to for shop' is redundant and contains incorrect preposition usage. The correct phrase is 'I go to the shop' without extra words or prepositions.

× Yes, yes, I usually make a list before I go, before I do my work because it help me to know what should I do for today.

✓ Yes, yes, I usually make a list before I go, before I do my work because it helps me to know what I should do today.

The verb 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Also, the word order in 'what should I do for today' is incorrect; it should be 'what I should do today' for proper sentence structure.

× Because some people think the making list is can't it cannot help us to do anything for example, my mom, ** *** didn't make a list when we want when we.

✓ Because some people think making a list cannot help us do anything. For example, my mom didn't make a list when we wanted to.

The phrase 'the making list' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list' without 'the'. Also, 'is can't it cannot' is redundant and ungrammatical; use 'cannot' alone. The sentence is incomplete and needs to be finished properly. 'When we want when we' is incomplete and should be corrected to 'when we wanted to' to indicate past tense.