List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语句不连贯，存在重复和断断续续的表达，建议练习完整流畅的句子表达，避免重复词汇，并且用连接词使句子更自然。

예시: Yes, I often make a list before shopping because it helps me prepare what I want to buy and improves my efficiency.

제안: 回答中语法和表达不完整，句子断断续续，建议练习完整句子结构，使用连接词使表达更连贯，同时具体说明如何帮助完成任务。

예시: Yes, I often make a list for my work the day before because it helps me complete my assignments more clearly and efficiently, which allows me to achieve my future goals.

제안: 回答表达不清晰，句子结构混乱，建议用更清楚的句子表达观点，并用连接词使逻辑更连贯，具体说明原因。

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they don't want to impose strict rules on their daily routines, which might feel too serious or restrictive.

제안: 回答中存在重复和不完整的句子，建议练习完整且连贯的表达，明确说明使用手机列清单的具体优点。

예시: Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because it allows me to review it conveniently anytime, and I can easily edit or add items like in a digital notebook.

× Yes, I often make a list before shopping because in this way I can. Prepare. Prepare what I want to buy. Before practice, and that's improving my efficiency. And,

✓ Yes, I often make a list before shopping because in this way I can prepare what I want to buy beforehand, and that improves my efficiency.

原句中断句不完整，导致句子结构混乱。应将分散的短句合并成完整句子，使表达连贯。建议将“can. Prepare. Prepare what I want to buy. Before practice”合并为“can prepare what I want to buy beforehand”，并调整后半句使其语法正确。

× Yes, I do Often make a list before the next day happening. And in this way, I can. Complete my assignments more clearly and efficiently so that my future aim could be. Achieved. And it's.

✓ Yes, I often make a list before the next day's tasks. In this way, I can complete my assignments more clearly and efficiently so that my future aims can be achieved.

原句中“do Often”大小写错误且位置不当，“next day happening”表达不自然，应改为“next day's tasks”。句子中断句不当，导致表达不完整，应合并断句，调整时态和语态，使句子通顺。

× I think maybe because. Many people just don't have to set so many roles or disciplines on their daily routines. Which could be so serious, too. Oh. That they don't want to follow.

✓ I think maybe it's because many people don't have to set so many rules or disciplines in their daily routines, which could be too serious, so they don't want to follow them.

原句断句过多，导致句子不完整且表达混乱。“roles”应为“rules”，“on their daily routines”应为“in their daily routines”。应将分散的句子合并，调整词汇和句式，使表达更自然流畅。

× Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because in this way I can. I can. Review then. Conveniently. Maybe in a document or just enough, like a notebook. And also the.

✓ Actually, I prefer to make a list on my phone because in this way I can review it conveniently, maybe in a document or just like a notebook.

原句断句不当，导致表达不完整且重复“I can”。“Review then”应为“review it”。“just enough”用法不当，应改为“just like”。应合并断句，调整词汇，使句子完整且通顺。