List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid small errors and redundancy, such as "in the in my phone." Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, you can say "because" to explain why you make a list.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list when I shop because I write it down on the notes app on my phone. This helps me avoid spending too much money and forgetting anything important.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and unclear phrasing like "I prefer to I I have my tasks written somewhere down in my head." Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repeating words. Also, add linking words to improve coherence.

예시: Not really. I prefer to keep my tasks in my mind and do what I can at the moment. This method works for me most of the time.

제안: There are several grammar mistakes and repetitions in your answer, such as "don't liking don't like" and "tasking as tasking." Try to use correct grammar and avoid repeating words. Also, provide more specific reasons and use linking words like "because" or "since."

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or time-consuming. They prefer to remember things instead of writing them down.

제안: Your answer is natural and clear. To improve, try to use more formal language instead of "wanna" and add linking words like "since" to connect your ideas better.

예시: I prefer making a list on my phone since I always have it with me. This way, I avoid losing paper lists and struggling to remember what I wrote.

× I write it down on my notes app in the in my phone.

✓ I write it down on the notes app in my phone.

The phrase 'in the in my phone' contains a redundancy and incorrect preposition use. The correct preposition is 'on' for apps, and the extra 'in the' should be removed for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I prefer to I I have my tasks written somewhere down in my head and I get to do what I can at the moment of time.

✓ I prefer to have my tasks written somewhere in my head and I do what I can at the moment.

The sentence has repeated words 'I I' and awkward phrasing 'somewhere down in my head' and 'at the moment of time'. Removing repetition and simplifying the phrase improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I would say 1 main reason why some people don't liking don't like writing lists is because they might get lazy.

✓ I would say one main reason why some people don't like writing lists is because they might get lazy.

The phrase 'don't liking' is incorrect; the correct form is 'don't like' because 'like' is a verb that should be in base form after 'don't'. Also, '1' should be written as 'one' in formal speech.

× They might view it as a tasking as tasking to do, they just prefer to remember it.

✓ They might view it as a task to do; they just prefer to remember it.

The word 'tasking' is incorrectly used as an adjective here. The correct noun is 'task'. Also, the sentence is a run-on and should be separated properly for clarity.