List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Cevabınız doğal ve anlaşılır, ancak daha akıcı ve etkili olması için cümle yapılarınızı çeşitlendirebilir ve gereksiz tekrarları azaltabilirsiniz. Ayrıca, neden liste yapmanın kolay olduğunu daha spesifik örneklerle açıklayabilirsiniz.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember everything I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

제안: Cevabınız doğrudan ve net, ancak daha doğal ve akıcı olması için cümlelerinizi biraz daha genişletebilirsiniz. Örneğin, işiniz olmadığını belirtirken gelecekte liste yapmayı düşünüp düşünmediğinizi de ekleyebilirsiniz.

예시: I don't have a job at the moment, so I don't make work-related lists. However, if I had a job, I would definitely use lists to stay organized.

제안: Cevabınızda fikir belirtmişsiniz ancak cümle yapısı biraz karışık ve anlamı tam net değil. Daha açık ve mantıklı bağlantılar kurarak düşüncelerinizi ifade etmelisiniz.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to shop spontaneously and believe it helps them focus only on what they really need without restrictions.

제안: Cevabınızda tekrarlar ve dilbilgisi hataları var, bu da akıcılığı ve anlaşılırlığı azaltıyor. Daha kısa ve net cümlelerle, neden her iki yöntemi de sevdiğinizi açıklamalısınız.

예시: I prefer making lists both on paper and on my phone because I enjoy writing by hand, but using my phone is convenient when I'm on the go.

× It's much easier than without list.

✓ It's much easier than without a list.

The sentence is missing the indefinite article 'a' before the singular noun 'list'. In English, singular countable nouns usually require an article. Here, 'a list' is correct.

× Well, I think that it's much easier to focus on your own, the products you need, and not to buy products you don't need.

✓ Well, I think that it's much easier to focus on your own products, the products you need, and not to buy products you don't need.

The phrase 'focus on your own' is incomplete and unclear. It should be 'focus on your own products' to specify what 'own' refers to, making the sentence clearer and grammatically correct.

× Oh, both of them. I like it to make. I like to make make a list on paper and in my phone too, because it's I like, I like writing. I like it very much. And that's why I like them both.

✓ Oh, both of them. I like to make a list. I like to make a list on paper and on my phone too, because I like writing. I like it very much. And that's why I like them both.

The original sentence has redundant words ('make make') and awkward phrasing ('I like it to make'). Also, 'in my phone' should be 'on my phone' as the correct preposition for devices is 'on'. The corrected sentence removes redundancy and uses proper prepositions and phrasing.