List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答不够自然，表达有些重复且不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，直接回答问题，并用具体理由支持。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I enjoy discovering new items spontaneously, which makes shopping more enjoyable for me.

제안: 回答中有语法错误，表达不够流畅。建议使用更准确的词汇和句式，清晰说明列表的作用。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively throughout the day.

제안: 回答较为简洁，但表达略显笨拙。建议使用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel it restricts their creativity, and they prefer to act spontaneously, which they find more enjoyable.

제안: 表达不够清晰，语法错误较多。建议简化句子，明确表达偏好和原因。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because using my phone can be distracting, and I might get sidetracked by other apps.

× No, because I love to watch some new things and when I bought these things I thought it is very enjoyable and supportable for me, so I don't like to make a list.

✓ No, because I love to watch some new things and when I buy these things I think it is very enjoyable and supportive for me, so I don't like to make a list.

句子中时态不一致，前半句用现在时，后半句却用过去时“bought”和“thought”，应保持时态一致，使用一般现在时。

× No, because I love to watch some new things and when I bought these things I thought it is very enjoyable and supportable for me, so I don't like to make a list.

✓ No, because I love to watch some new things and when I buy these things I think it is very enjoyable and supportive for me, so I don't like to make a list.

“supportable”用法不当，应使用形容词“supportive”表示“支持的，有帮助的”。

× Yes, I make a list of all my work because it can help me to know when I need to do these things and when I need to do another things and it makes me have a friendly time in this day.

✓ Yes, I make a list of all my work because it can help me to know when I need to do these things and when I need to do other things and it makes me have a friendly time in this day.

“another things”中“another”用于单数名词，后接复数名词应使用“other”。

× Yes, I make a list of all my work because it can help me to know when I need to do these things and when I need to do another things and it makes me have a friendly time in this day.

✓ Yes, I make a list of all my work because it can help me to know when I need to do these things and when I need to do other things and it makes me have a friendly time during this day.

“in this day”用法不当，表示“在这一天”应使用“during this day”或“in this day”根据语境调整。

× I prefer to make a list on the paper because I don't like to play phones because if I use phones I may be to use another apps to do not to watch my list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I don't like to play with phones; if I use phones, I may use other apps and not check my list.

“make a list on the paper”中“on paper”更自然；“play phones”应为“play with phones”；“may be to use another apps to do not to watch my list”结构混乱，应简化为“may use other apps and not check my list”。

× I prefer to make a list on the paper because I don't like to play phones because if I use phones I may be to use another apps to do not to watch my list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because I don't like to play with phones; if I use phones, I may use other apps and not check my list.

“another apps”中“another”用于单数，复数应使用“other apps”。