List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子结构，避免重复，并且直接回答问题。可以使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list of the items I need before shopping, but I also like to browse the supermarket and pick some things spontaneously.

제안: 回答基本清晰，但句子结构不够连贯，时态使用不准确。建议使用连词连接句子，并注意时态一致性。

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work or study. Before I start, I set deadlines, which helps me work more effectively.

제안: 表达不够流畅且有语法错误，建议使用更准确的词汇和句型，避免重复，并且使句子更连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel restricted by them, and approaching deadlines can make them nervous.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不清晰的问题，建议简化句子，使用正确的词汇，并且注意句子连贯性。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I can easily see what I need to do. Using my phone distracts me because I might check other apps.

× Actually I will make a list what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy and I enjoy to hang out in the supermarket and select the select the things.

✓ Actually, I will make a list of what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy, and I enjoy hanging out in the supermarket and selecting the things.

动词 enjoy 后面应接动名词形式（-ing），而不是不定式。此处应使用 'enjoy hanging out' 和 'selecting'。

× Actually I will make a list what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy and I enjoy to hang out in the supermarket and select the select the things.

✓ Actually, I will make a list of what I want, but I don't list anything I want to buy, and I enjoy hanging out in the supermarket and selecting the things.

短语 'make a list' 后面应接介词 'of' 来引出内容，正确表达为 'make a list of what I want'。

× Yes, I always make list for my work or study.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work or study.

名词 'list' 在此处应使用复数形式，因为表示经常制作多个清单。

× Yes, I always make list for my work or study.

✓ Yes, I always make lists for my work or study.

介词 'for' 用法正确，无需更改。此处主要是复数形式错误。

× For me. It made me more effective to do the things.

✓ For me, it makes me more effective to do things.

句子断开不连贯，应合并为一句，且时态应与上下文一致，使用一般现在时 'makes'。

× Maybe this thing make a list will confine their and when when closing to the deadline they may feel nervous to complete it.

✓ Maybe making a list will confine them, and when they are close to the deadline, they may feel nervous to complete it.

代词 'their' 用法错误，应使用宾格 'them'；此外，句子结构不完整，需调整。

× Maybe this thing make a list will confine their and when when closing to the deadline they may feel nervous to complete it.

✓ Maybe making a list will confine them, and when they are close to the deadline, they may feel nervous to complete it.

短语 'close to the deadline' 中应使用介词 'to'，表示接近某事。

× I prefer to make lists on paper because when I study or working I can see the paper and know what I what should I do and if I make it on my phone I will to check my plan and when I take the phone I will be disobjected.

✓ I prefer to make lists on paper because when I study or work, I can see the paper and know what I should do. If I make it on my phone, I will check my plan, and when I take the phone, I will be distracted.

动词 'study or working' 应统一时态，改为 'study or work'；'will to check' 中 'to' 多余，应去掉；'disobjected' 拼写错误，应为 'distracted'。