List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping. I think it can help me to save more time to buy the goods you need. Besides, this can help me stay in my budget.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
I always make lists for my work. In my opinion it is an efficient way to save more time when I have many tasks and it can help me to be a disciplined person.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
In my view, they may regard lists as a monotonous tool and they may think it will waste their time and not very flexible.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone. It is so convenient to edit list to everywhere and anytime. By using phones. I can also share my list with my companions.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 75.0제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但有些句子结构不够自然，且存在小的语法错误。建议使用更地道的表达方式，并避免重复，比如将“save more time to buy the goods you need”改为“save time by focusing on the items I need”。
예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time by focusing on the items I need. Moreover, it allows me to stick to my budget and avoid unnecessary purchases.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 70.0제안: 回答中表达了观点，但句子稍显重复且缺少连接词。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时丰富细节，例如说明如何帮助提高效率。
예시: I always make lists for my work because they help me manage multiple tasks efficiently. By organizing my duties, I can save time and maintain discipline throughout the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不够自然的问题。建议改进句子结构，使用更准确的词汇，并用连接词使表达更流畅。
예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they find them monotonous and believe that creating lists wastes time. Additionally, they may feel that lists are not flexible enough for their needs.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不连贯的问题。建议使用完整句子，避免断句错误，并使用更自然的表达方式。
예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient to edit them anytime and anywhere. Also, using my phone allows me to easily share my lists with my friends or family.
문법
× I think it can help me to save more time to buy the goods you need.
✓ I think it can help me save more time buying the goods I need.
动词help后面不需要to，且save后面用动名词buying表示目的，且goods的所有者应为说话者自己，故用I need。
× I think it can help me to save more time to buy the goods you need.
✓ I think it can help me save more time buying the goods I need.
句中goods的所有者应为说话者自己，不能用you，需改为I。
× It is so convenient to edit list to everywhere and anytime.
✓ It is so convenient to edit the list everywhere and anytime.
动词edit后不接介词to，且everywhere和anytime前不加介词。
× It is so convenient to edit list to everywhere and anytime.
✓ It is so convenient to edit the list everywhere and anytime.
list前缺少定冠词the，表示特指。
× By using phones. I can also share my list with my companions.
✓ By using my phone, I can also share my list with my companions.
原句断句错误，应合并为一句，且phones改为单数my phone更符合语境。
× they may think it will waste their time and not very flexible.
✓ they may think it will waste their time and is not very flexible.
连接两个谓语时，缺少连系动词is，导致句子结构不完整。
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