List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应避免语法错误，如“if I have something to buy”应改为“if I have something to buy”，并且表达应更自然流畅。此外，回答中应避免冗余，且句子结构应更完整。

예시: I usually make a shopping list only when I need to buy specific items. Otherwise, I just go shopping to relax and browse around.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如“It not always work”应为“It doesn't always work”。建议使用连接词使句子更连贯，同时提供更具体的细节说明。

예시: Yes, I often make a list for my work. Although it doesn't always work perfectly, it helps me clarify my plans and stay organized.

제안: 回答不够具体且表达重复，建议用更清晰的句子表达观点，并提供具体原因。避免使用模糊表达如“due to they don't like”。

예시: I'm not sure, but I think some people dislike making lists because they find it boring or prefer to be spontaneous.

제안: 回答中有重复词汇“whether whether”，且表达不够完整。建议使用更准确的表达，并举例说明偏好。

예시: I don't have a strong preference between paper or phone lists; it depends on convenience. For instance, if I don't have paper handy, I use my phone to make a list.

× Most of the time I go to shop just relax, but sometimes if I have to buy some specific I will make a list.

✓ Most of the time I go shopping just to relax, but sometimes if I have to buy something specific I will make a list.

这里'shop'应该用动名词形式'shopping'表示去购物的动作；'some specific'缺少名词，应该用'something specific'表示某些具体的东西。

× Yes, I will make a list when I am working. It not always work but it can make me clarify my plan.

✓ Yes, I will make a list when I am working. It does not always work but it can help me clarify my plan.

'It not always work'缺少助动词'does'，正确形式是'does not always work'；'make me clarify'表达不自然，改为'help me clarify'更合适。

× I guess some people dislike making plans due to they don't like.

✓ I guess some people dislike making plans because they don't like it.

'due to'后面应接名词或名词短语，这里应使用'because'引导原因状语从句；句尾缺少宾语'it'。

× Actually I don't have a preference about them and it depends on whether whether it's convenient.

✓ Actually I don't have a preference between them and it depends on whether it's convenient.

'preference about them'用法不当，正确搭配是'preference between them'；'whether'重复出现，应去掉一个。