List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more natural and grammatically correct by using complete sentences and avoiding redundancy. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas clearly and keep your response concise within 5 sentences.

예시: It depends on the situation. If I have to buy many items, I usually make a list as a reminder. However, if I only need one or two things, I don't bother making a list.

제안: Focus on using correct verb tenses and clearer sentence structure. Start with a direct answer, then explain with supporting details using linking words to improve coherence.

예시: I usually don't make lists for my work because I have a sharp memory. However, if I find it helpful, I would definitely consider making notes to stay organized.

제안: Clarify your ideas and avoid confusing sentences. Use linking words to explain reasons clearly and provide specific examples to support your opinion.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they prefer to rely on their memory. On the other hand, people with weaker memories often make lists or timetables to help them remember important tasks or shopping items.

제안: Improve grammar and sentence flow by using correct verb forms and linking words. Be specific about the advantages of using a phone for lists.

예시: I always prefer to make notes on my phone because it saves paper and pen. Moreover, I can access my list anytime without carrying a physical copy with me.

× It's depend upon situation.

✓ It depends upon the situation.

The modal verb 'It's' (it is) is incorrectly used with 'depend'. The correct form is 'depends' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. Use the third person singular present tense form 'depends'.

× I if I have like I have to buy too much stuff so then I make a note to as a reminder.

✓ If I have to buy too much stuff, then I make a note as a reminder.

The sentence has redundant and misplaced words ('I if I have like'). Simplify the sentence structure by removing unnecessary words and placing clauses correctly for clarity.

× But sometime I usually have to buy one or two things so I don't make note for that.

✓ But sometimes I usually have to buy one or two things, so I don't make a note for that.

The word 'sometime' should be plural 'sometimes' to indicate frequency. Also, 'make note' should be 'make a note' to be grammatically correct.

× So like I I having a sharp memory, I don't make notes for my work, but if like it will be beneficial for me, I definitely wanted to make notes.

✓ So, like, I have a sharp memory, I don't make notes for my work, but if it will be beneficial for me, I will definitely want to make notes.

The phrase 'I having' is incorrect; it should be 'I have'. Also, 'wanted' should be 'want' or 'will want' to match the future conditional context.

× I think some people and the people who love to make notes because they like they having a weak memory, they didn't remember but they have to do so they make a timetable or make a list to buy something.

✓ I think some people love to make notes because they have a weak memory; they don't remember, but they have to do things, so they make a timetable or a list to buy something.

The sentence has pronoun misuse and awkward phrasing. 'They like they having' is incorrect; it should be 'they have'. Also, 'didn't remember' should be 'don't remember' to maintain present tense. The sentence is restructured for clarity.

× I always prefer to make a notes on a like phone because we didn't require any paper or the pen to write.

✓ I always prefer to make notes on my phone because we don't require any paper or pen to write.

'Make a notes' is incorrect; 'notes' is plural and should not have 'a'. 'On a like phone' is awkward; 'on my phone' is clearer. 'Didn't require' should be 'don't require' to match present tense.

× Moreover, we can see at any time we didn't have to copy any hard copy with ourself.

✓ Moreover, we can see it at any time; we don't have to carry any hard copy with us.

'We didn't have to copy' is incorrect; it should be 'we don't have to carry'. 'Ourself' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'ourselves', but here 'with us' is appropriate. The sentence is rephrased for clarity and correctness.