List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid filler words like 'umm' and repetition such as 'make a make a list'. Also, use more natural vocabulary like 'shopping list' instead of 'inventory'. Keep your answer concise and directly address the question with clear reasons.

예시: No, I usually don't make a shopping list because I don't buy many items. I prefer to buy things spontaneously when I shop.

제안: Provide a clearer and more confident answer. Even if you don't work, you can explain your thoughts about making lists for work hypothetically. Avoid filler words like 'uh' and 'I don't know' to sound more fluent.

예시: I don't have a job yet since I'm only 15, but if I did, I would definitely make a list to stay organized and ensure I complete all my tasks efficiently.

제안: Try to use more formal and varied vocabulary, and avoid negative words like 'lazy'. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because it can be time-consuming. Additionally, they might feel confident enough to remember everything without writing it down.

제안: Avoid unclear phrases like 'make Molly some phone'. Use clear and coherent sentences with appropriate linking words. Also, try to explain your preference with specific reasons.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's convenient and I can easily edit or add items. Technology today makes it simple to organize my shopping list digitally.

× I think because making lists take a lot of time and they are lazy or they think they are smart enough to memorize all the things they want to buy.

✓ I think because making lists takes a lot of time and they are lazy or they think they are smart enough to memorize all the things they want to buy.

The subject 'making lists' is singular, so the verb should be 'takes' instead of 'take' to agree in number. This is a singular and plural issue.

× I prefer making this on my phone 'cause it's more comfortable and like technology is developed today.

✓ I prefer making this on my phone 'cause it's more comfortable and technology has developed today.

The phrase 'like technology is developed today' is incorrect. 'Like' is unnecessary here and 'technology is developed' should be in present perfect tense 'technology has developed' to indicate progress up to now. This is an incorrect use of prepositions and verb tense.

× Nowadays, and I think it's more comfortable to make Molly some phone.

✓ Nowadays, I think it's more comfortable to make a list on my phone.

The sentence is fragmented and unclear. 'Make Molly some phone' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo. The correct sentence should be 'Nowadays, I think it's more comfortable to make a list on my phone.' This is a sentence structure error.