List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn hơi lặp từ và thiếu sự mạch lạc. Bạn nên tránh dùng từ 'like' quá nhiều và sắp xếp câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn để tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list, especially for groceries, cosmetics, and books. This helps me remember what I need and prevents me from buying unnecessary items.

제안: Bạn nên chú ý ngữ pháp và cách dùng từ để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy sử dụng các liên từ phù hợp để câu trả lời mạch lạc và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp.

예시: I used to make to-do lists for my schoolwork, but I found them restrictive and overwhelming. Therefore, I switched to a weekly planner, which gives me more flexibility to manage my time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp, từ vựng không phù hợp. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý tưởng rõ ràng, tránh dùng từ không chính xác và lặp lại từ 'like' quá nhiều.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because their schedules are too busy, or they tend to procrastinate. Also, lists can feel too restrictive, and everyone has different ways of organizing their work.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp và từ vựng không chính xác, làm cho ý nghĩa không rõ ràng. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt mạch lạc, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và tránh lặp từ.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because writing physically helps me remember better and feel more responsible. It also reminds me of my childhood when I decorated my notebooks with stickers.

× Absolutely. Usually I would try to make like a, a list of products that I would need to buy, especially my groceries, cosmetics, books and et cetera.

✓ Absolutely. Usually I would try to make a list of products that I would need to buy, especially my groceries, cosmetics, books, et cetera.

The phrase 'like a, a list' contains unnecessary filler words 'like' and repeated 'a'. Removing 'like' and the repeated article improves clarity and grammatical correctness. 'Et cetera' should be preceded by a comma to separate it from the list items.

× So just kind of like allows me to like remember what I needed to purchase at that moment and also to like limit me from like over purchasing that as it could be a really bad handwritten of mine.

✓ So it just kind of allows me to remember what I need to purchase at that moment and also to limit me from over-purchasing, as it could be a really bad habit of mine.

The original sentence misuses 'like' excessively and uses 'handwritten' incorrectly instead of 'habit'. Also, 'needed' should be 'need' to match the present context. 'Limit me from over purchasing that' is better expressed as 'limit me from over-purchasing'. Removing unnecessary 'like' and correcting word choice improves clarity and grammar.

× I did try making A to do list before when it comes to my schoolwork and workload, but however I find it does not be useful as I feel restricted and can be overwhelmed at the end of the day.

✓ I did try making a to-do list before when it comes to my schoolwork and workload, but I find it is not useful as I feel restricted and can be overwhelmed at the end of the day.

The phrase 'does not be useful' is incorrect; it should be 'is not useful' to correctly use the verb 'to be' in present tense. Also, 'A to do list' should be 'a to-do list' with proper hyphenation and lowercase 'a'. Removing 'however' after 'but' avoids redundancy.

× So rather than that, I tried the alternative by using a weekly planner which allows me to have room to kind of like wiggle around and to have more flexibility of my time.

✓ So rather than that, I tried the alternative of using a weekly planner which allows me to have room to wiggle around and to have more flexibility with my time.

The phrase 'tried the alternative by using' is better expressed as 'tried the alternative of using'. Also, 'flexibility of my time' should be 'flexibility with my time' to use the correct preposition.

× I'd say the reason is because that usually the schedule will be too packed or they can be like a procrastinate type like this, like myself.

✓ I'd say the reason is that usually the schedule is too packed or they can be the procrastinating type, like myself.

'Because that' is redundant; 'is that' suffices. 'Procrastinate type' is incorrect; it should be 'procrastinating type' (adjective form). Also, 'will be' is better as 'is' for general statements. Removing unnecessary 'like' improves clarity.

× So maybe like having like a richest girl to make them feel like a bit too restricted to all of them.

✓ So maybe having a rigid schedule makes them feel a bit too restricted.

'Richest girl' is incorrect and likely a mishearing or typo; 'rigid schedule' fits context. Also, 'like' is overused and should be removed. 'To all of them' is unnecessary and confusing here.

× So I'll say that by like making like a rich list might not be for them 'cause like different people have like have different styles of working and planning.

✓ So I'll say that making a rich list might not be for them because different people have different styles of working and planning.

Excessive use of 'like' is unnecessary and disrupts sentence flow. 'Cause' should be 'because' in formal speech. Removing repeated 'have' and unnecessary fillers improves clarity.

× Also, I love to Make Love some papers, even though it forms like a much more like convenient.

✓ Also, I love to use paper, even though digital forms are much more convenient.

'Make Love some papers' is incorrect and unclear; likely intended 'use paper'. 'Forms like a much more like convenient' is ungrammatical; corrected to 'digital forms are much more convenient' for clarity and correctness.

× So because that I would love like to write on paper like a physical form so that I would be reminded strongly like my physical thing that I I'm accountable for my work.

✓ So because of that, I would love to write on paper in physical form so that I am strongly reminded that I am accountable for my work.

'Because that' should be 'because of that'. 'Write on paper like a physical form' is awkward; 'write on paper in physical form' is correct. 'Reminded strongly like my physical thing' is unclear; corrected to 'strongly reminded that I am accountable' for clarity.

× And also it really reminds me of when I was small and used to decorate in my books with stickers so that.

✓ Also, it really reminds me of when I was small and used to decorate my books with stickers.

The phrase 'decorate in my books' is incorrect; it should be 'decorate my books'. The sentence ends abruptly with 'so that' which is incomplete and should be removed for grammatical completeness.