List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is somewhat repetitive and contains grammatical errors. Try to make your response more natural and concise by avoiding redundancy and using correct grammar. Also, provide a clear topic sentence followed by supporting details with linking words.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need and prevents me from spending too much money.

제안: Your answer lacks fluency and contains filler words and incomplete sentences. Try to speak more smoothly and complete your thoughts. Use linking words to connect ideas and provide specific details about how the list helps you.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and focus on my tasks. I usually use digital apps that remind me of deadlines, which makes me more productive.

제안: Your answer is too short and does not address the question. Try to provide a complete response with your opinion and reasons, using linking words to explain your ideas.

예시: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally instead.

제안: Your answer is unclear and contains grammatical errors. Avoid starting with 'Yes' when the question is a choice. Provide a clear topic sentence and explain your preference with specific reasons using linking words.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is always with me, and it's easier to add or delete items quickly.

× It helps me remember, remind what I needed, keeps me spending from too much, keeps me from spending too much money.

✓ It helps me remember and reminds me what I need, keeps me from spending too much money.

The verb 'remind' should be in the third person singular present tense 'reminds' to agree with the singular subject 'It'. Also, 'what I needed' should be 'what I need' to maintain present tense consistency. The phrase 'keeps me spending from too much' is incorrect; it should be 'keeps me from spending too much'. These corrections ensure subject-verb agreement and proper verb tense usage.

× I use the digital apps umm, to reminds me uh, and I feel.

✓ I use digital apps to remind me, and I feel...

The verb 'reminds' is incorrectly used after 'to'; after 'to' we use the base form of the verb, so 'remind' is correct. Also, 'the digital apps' should be 'digital apps' unless referring to specific apps. The sentence is incomplete but corrected for grammar as per instructions.

× Don't know.

✓ I don't know.

The sentence lacks a subject, which is necessary in English sentences. Adding 'I' completes the sentence and makes it grammatically correct.

× Yes I I prefer make a list on the phone because phone always on my hands.

✓ Yes, I prefer to make a list on the phone because the phone is always in my hands.

The verb 'prefer' should be followed by 'to' plus the base verb, so 'prefer to make' is correct. Also, 'phone always on my hands' is missing the verb 'is' and the article 'the' before 'phone'. The phrase 'in my hands' is more natural than 'on my hands'.

× If I want to delete something and then I hate something I can do this so easier.

✓ If I want to delete something or if I don't like something, I can do this much more easily.

The sentence has conjunction and word choice issues. 'And then I hate something' is awkward; 'or if I don't like something' is clearer. 'So easier' is incorrect; the correct comparative adverb is 'much more easily'. These changes improve clarity and grammatical correctness.