List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答は基本的に明確ですが、文法の誤り（"before go"は"before going"が正しい）や、より自然な表現に改善の余地があります。また、接続詞を使って文をつなげるとより流暢になります。

예시: Yes, I always make a list before going to the store because it helps me avoid forgetting important items and also saves me money.

제안: 回答が少し不明瞭で、文法的な誤りや繰り返しがあります。より明確に理由を述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明すると良いでしょう。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to choose tasks based on my interests, and I find it more effective to work without a list.

제안: 回答が冗長で繰り返しが多く、文法的な誤りもあります。より簡潔で明確に理由を述べ、接続詞を使って論理的に説明することが必要です。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they feel pressured to do everything perfectly, which can be stressful and ineffective.

제안: 回答は簡潔ですが、文法的な誤り（"more easy"は"easier"が正しい）があります。より自然な表現に改善し、理由をもう少し具体的に述べると良いでしょう。

예시: I prefer to write my list on paper because it's easier to remember and I find it more convenient than using my phone.

× Yes I do, I always make a list before go to the store.

✓ Yes I do, I always make a list before going to the store.

The verb 'go' after the preposition 'before' should be in the gerund form 'going' to correctly indicate the action that happens prior to making the list.

× No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I pay for it to choose work based on my interest and personally it's more effective for me, more effective for me to work without this.

✓ No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I prefer to choose work based on my interest and personally it's more effective for me to work without it.

The phrase 'I pay for it to choose work' is incorrect. The modal verb 'prefer' is appropriate here to express choice. Also, 'this' should be replaced with 'it' to refer back to making a list.

× Because sometimes it doesn't work when for example when I when I follow my list I I feel like I have to do everything perfectly and as I said, I cannot do anything so it doesn't effective for some people.

✓ Because sometimes it doesn't work; for example, when I follow my list, I feel like I have to do everything perfectly and, as I said, I cannot do anything, so it isn't effective for some people.

The sentence needed punctuation for clarity. Also, 'doesn't effective' is incorrect; it should be 'isn't effective' because 'effective' is an adjective and requires the verb 'to be'. The phrase 'when for example when I when I' is redundant and should be simplified.

× I prefer to write down on paper because it's more easy to remember than on on the phone.

✓ I prefer to write down on paper because it's easier to remember than on the phone.

The comparative form of 'easy' is 'easier', not 'more easy'. Also, the repeated word 'on' before 'the phone' is redundant and should be removed.