List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法和用词不够准确，且句子较长且重复。建议简化句子结构，注意时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember what I need to buy and prevents me from forgetting anything.

제안: 回答中时态混乱，句子结构不完整，表达不清晰。建议使用正确时态，简洁明了地表达观点，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for work because it helps me organize my tasks and ensures I complete everything on time.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，逻辑连接不够流畅。建议使用连词连接句子，注意代词使用，表达更自然。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to do things spontaneously and want their lives to be more flexible and comfortable.

제안: 回答不完整且表达混乱，缺少清晰的主题句和支持细节。建议先明确表达偏好，再用具体例子支持观点，注意句子完整性。

예시: It depends on the situation. For detailed plans like my daily schedule, I prefer writing on paper because I can keep it on my desk and feel more organized.

× I can avoid forgot to buy something.

✓ I can avoid forgetting to buy something.

这里动词avoid后面应该接动名词形式forgetting，而不是动词的过去式forgot。动词avoid后面通常跟动名词，表示避免做某事。

× Yes, I always made the list when I was work because I think at least can make me do my all the job at the timetable and I can finish every all the things I want to do in a day and it's very.

✓ Yes, I always make the list when I am at work because I think at least it can help me do all my jobs according to the timetable and I can finish everything I want to do in a day and it's very helpful.

这里时态不一致，题目问的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时make而不是过去时made；另外，'when I was work'应为'when I am at work'，表示在工作时；句子结构混乱，需调整使表达清晰。

× Because maybe some people they just want do something when they want.

✓ Because maybe some people just want to do something when they want.

句中多余的代词they应去掉，且动词want后应接不定式to do，表示想做某事。

× If they do the least, this will control them to do a lot of things.

✓ If they make the list, this will control them to do a lot of things.

这里动词do the least应为make the list，表达“做清单”；另外，control后面接不定式to do不正确，应该改为控制他们做很多事情的表达方式。

× But they want their life more flexible, more comfortable so that they don't like to make him list.

✓ But they want their life to be more flexible and more comfortable, so they don't like to make a list.

句中'him list'错误，应该是'a list'；此外，want后面应接不定式结构to be，表示想要生活更灵活舒适。

× I like to on the paper it can make me more comfortable to do the things I can put it on my table but.

✓ I like to use paper; it makes me more comfortable to do things, and I can put it on my table.

句中'to on the paper'搭配错误，应改为'use paper'；句子结构不完整，需拆分并调整，使表达更自然流畅。