List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时应更直接地回应问题，并避免重复表达。例如，可以先明确回答是否做购物清单，然后简要说明原因。

예시: I don't usually make a list when I shop because I prefer to browse the store and pick up items as I go.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，且表达不够自然。建议使用正确时态和更流畅的表达方式，同时避免拼写错误。

예시: Yes, I make lists for my work because they help me remember the tasks I need to complete next.

제안: 回答缺乏具体细节，且表达不够连贯。建议使用连接词丰富内容，并提供更具体的理由。

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because they feel it wastes time and prefer to rely on memory instead.

제안: 回答较为清晰，但语法和用词需改进。建议注意主谓一致，并使用更自然的表达。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient; I can use apps like Notes to organize my tasks easily.

× Yeah, I tried to make a list when I was work and I think it's very useful.

✓ Yeah, I tried to make a list when I was working and I think it's very useful.

这里的 'was work' 是错误的，应该用动名词形式 'working' 来表示进行时态，表示当时正在工作。

× It can Remember Me, remind me what things I have to do next.

✓ It can remind me what things I have to do next.

'Remember Me' 这里不合适，应该用 'remind me'，因为提醒某人用 'remind'，而不是 'remember'。

× I think maybe they think making list is very waste of time.

✓ I think maybe they think making lists is a waste of time.

'making list' 应该用复数 'making lists'，因为泛指多次制作清单；'waste of time' 前需要加不定冠词 'a'。

× I prefer to make lists on phones because I think phones is more convenient.

✓ I prefer to make lists on phones because I think phones are more convenient.

'phones' 是复数，谓语动词应使用复数形式 'are'，而不是单数 'is'。