List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Jawaban Anda kurang jelas dan tidak relevan dengan pertanyaan. Cobalah untuk memberikan jawaban yang langsung menjawab pertanyaan dengan kalimat yang alami dan efektif. Misalnya, jelaskan apakah Anda membuat daftar belanja dan alasannya secara singkat dan jelas.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because it helps me remember what I need and avoid buying unnecessary items.

제안: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan sulit dipahami. Cobalah untuk menjawab langsung dengan struktur yang jelas dan kalimat yang mudah dimengerti. Jelaskan apakah Anda membuat daftar untuk pekerjaan dan apakah itu efektif, dengan alasan yang spesifik.

예시: Yes, I make a to-do list for my work, and it works well because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time efficiently.

제안: Jawaban Anda terlalu singkat dan tidak memberikan alasan yang jelas. Cobalah untuk memberikan pendapat yang lebih lengkap dan spesifik tentang mengapa beberapa orang mungkin tidak suka membuat daftar.

예시: Some people might not like making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember things mentally instead.

제안: Jawaban Anda tidak jelas dan tidak lengkap. Cobalah untuk menyatakan preferensi Anda dengan jelas dan berikan alasan yang spesifik mengapa Anda memilih metode tersebut.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is convenient and I can easily edit or add items anytime.

× Yes, I make leaves around shelf and because littering.

✓ Yes, I make lists around the shelf because of littering.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect here; the correct plural form related to 'list' is 'lists'. Also, 'shelf' should be preceded by 'the' to specify a particular shelf. The phrase 'because littering' is incomplete and should be 'because of littering' to indicate the reason.

× Yes, I may work lease before Q2 this time because it helped me remember everything I need and share time for inspired last week I worked down Lt. alter in.

✓ Yes, I might work less before Q2 this time because it helps me remember everything I need and share time. Last week, I worked down at Lt. Alter Inn.

The modal verb 'may' is used incorrectly; 'might' is more appropriate for possibility. 'Lease' should be 'less' to indicate reduced work. The sentence is fragmented and unclear; it needs to be split and corrected for clarity and tense consistency. 'Helped' should be 'helps' to match present tense with 'need'. Prepositions like 'down at' are needed for location.

× I don't know, I like this and ****.

✓ I don't know, I like it and so on.

The pronoun 'this' is vague; 'it' is more appropriate to refer to making lists. The phrase 'and ****' is incomplete and should be replaced with a clearer expression like 'and so on' or 'and other things'.