List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答表达了观点，但语法错误较多，且句子结构较简单。建议注意动词时态和单复数形式，避免重复表达。可以尝试用更自然的表达方式，并增加连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need. Otherwise, I might forget important things and end up buying unnecessary products.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误，如时态和词形错误，且表达不够简洁。建议使用正确的时态和词汇，避免冗余，并用连接词使句子更连贯。

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my studies. When I have deadlines, I write tasks down, which helps me stay focused and work more efficiently.

제안: 回答较简短且语法不准确，表达不够自然。建议使用更准确的表达方式，增加细节说明原因，并使用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Some people might dislike making lists because they find it boring and prefer to handle things spontaneously, enjoying the freedom to decide as they go.

제안: 回答表达了观点，但有语法错误和重复词汇。建议注意句子结构，避免重复，并使用更自然的表达方式。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me, making it convenient to add or correct items anytime.

× Definitely, I make a list when I shop because it help me remember what things I need to buy.

✓ Definitely, I make a list when I shop because it helps me remember what things I need to buy.

这里的主语是单数的it，谓语动词help需要加-s，表示第三人称单数形式。

× Without the list I will forgot it and buy something not important for me.

✓ Without the list I will forget it and buy something not important for me.

这里使用了将来时will，后面动词应该用原形forget，而不是过去式forgot。

× Yes, I usually make a list for my studies even I had a deadline or something I need to finish, I will write down it on the list and it can make me more focused and efficiency.

✓ Yes, I usually make a list for my studies. Even if I have a deadline or something I need to finish, I will write it down on the list and it can make me more focused and efficient.

1. 'Even I had'应为'Even if I have'表示条件；2. 'write down it'应为'write it down'，代词位置错误；3. 'efficiency'是名词，需用形容词'efficient'修饰。

× Maybe because they think it's boring and they want to take things happen spontaneously.

✓ Maybe because they think it's boring and they want things to happen spontaneously.

动词短语'take things happen'不正确，应改为'things to happen'，表示让事情自发发生。

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always on me and I think it is convenient and easier to correct and add something in your on your list.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's always with me and I think it is convenient and easier to correct and add something on your list.

1. 'on me'应为'with me'，表示随身携带；2. 'in your on your list'重复且介词错误，应为'on your list'。