List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to make your answer more fluent and avoid repetition. Use clear and concise sentences, for example, say "I usually make a list of grocery items on my iPhone notes app before I go shopping." This will make your answer more natural and effective.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list of grocery items on my iPhone notes app before I go shopping. It helps me remember everything I need and saves time.

제안: Focus on clear sentence structure and avoid filler words. For example, say "Yes, I make lists both at work and at home because they help me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently." This improves clarity and coherence.

예시: Yes, I make lists both at work and at home because they help me stay organized and manage my tasks efficiently.

제안: Try to use linking words and clearer expressions. For example, "Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a timetable, which means they are less organized." This makes your answer more coherent and natural.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to work spontaneously rather than following a timetable, which means they are less organized.

제안: Avoid repetition and improve sentence flow. For example, say "I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because it is more convenient and helps me organize my tasks better." This sounds more natural and effective.

예시: I used to make lists on paper, but now I prefer using my phone because it is more convenient and helps me organize my tasks better.

× When I go to grocery shop and vegetable shop, I'm usually I try to make a list of grocery items in my I usually make notes in my phone iPhone note.

✓ When I go to the grocery store and vegetable shop, I usually try to make a list of grocery items and make notes in my iPhone notes.

The original sentence has repeated and misplaced phrases causing confusion and incorrect sentence structure. Correcting the sentence to a clear, logical order improves clarity and grammatical correctness.

× I usually make up a list on while I doing my work.

✓ I usually make up a list while I am doing my work.

The preposition 'on' is incorrectly used here and the verb form 'doing' needs an auxiliary verb 'am' to form the present continuous tense. Removing 'on' and adding 'am' corrects the sentence.

× It's I do I make to use the list of both in my workplace and in my my my home.

✓ I use the list both at my workplace and at my home.

The original sentence is confusing with repeated words and incorrect structure. Simplifying and restructuring the sentence makes it grammatically correct and clear.

× It makes me more organized and help me.

✓ It makes me more organized and helps me.

The verb after 'and' should agree with the singular subject 'It'. 'Help' should be changed to 'helps' to maintain subject-verb agreement.

× There are some people that don't like to make a list because they are not interested to to work according to a timetable.

✓ There are some people who don't like to make a list because they are not interested in working according to a timetable.

The phrase 'interested to to work' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'interested in working'. Also, 'that' should be replaced with 'who' when referring to people.

× Then they are not an organized person they work with according to their their spontaneous action.

✓ They are not organized people; they work according to their spontaneous actions.

The singular 'person' does not agree with plural 'they'. Also, 'work with according to' is incorrect; it should be 'work according to'. Repetition of 'their' is removed.

× Early I use used paper for making my list.

✓ Earlier, I used paper to make my list.

The adverb 'Early' is incorrect here; 'Earlier' is appropriate. Also, 'use used' is redundant; only 'used' is needed. 'For making' is better expressed as 'to make'.

× Nowadays I prefer my phone for making a list because it is more convenient and practical and which will help me to organize my duties, duties and.

✓ Nowadays, I prefer using my phone to make a list because it is more convenient and practical, and it helps me organize my duties.

The sentence has redundant words and awkward phrasing. 'Prefer my phone for making a list' is better as 'prefer using my phone to make a list'. The phrase 'and which will help me' is incorrect; it should be 'and it helps me'. The repeated word 'duties' is removed.