List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear and relevant, but it ends abruptly and contains some grammatical errors and redundancy. Try to complete your thoughts fully and avoid repeating ideas. Also, use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, definitely. I always make a shopping list because I often find it hard to remember everything I need. Having a list helps me stay organized and prevents me from buying unnecessary items, which ultimately saves money. For example, when I shop with a list, I avoid impulsive purchases and focus only on what I need.

제안: Your answer is clear, well-structured, and includes a relevant example. To improve, try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to enhance coherence.

예시: Yes, absolutely. I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget any important tasks. For instance, every morning I review my list to prioritize my tasks, which significantly increases my productivity throughout the day.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid repetition. Also, provide a more detailed explanation with linking words.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they believe it's a waste of time and they are confident they can remember everything. However, I believe this approach can lead to forgetting important tasks or items.

제안: Your answer is relevant but contains grammatical mistakes and some unclear phrases. Try to proofread your answer to avoid errors and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Well, personally, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it is very convenient and always accessible. For example, I can quickly open the Notes app and jot down important things without needing pen and paper. Additionally, digital lists are much easier to edit and organize, which helps me stay efficient and ensures I don't forget anything.

× For instance, when I go shopping with a list I tend to pick up things that impulsively, but with a list I.

✓ For instance, when I go shopping with a list, I tend not to pick up things impulsively.

The original sentence is incomplete and incorrectly uses 'that impulsively' without a verb. The phrase should be 'tend not to pick up things impulsively' to correctly express the intended meaning using the verb + -ing form after 'tend'. Also, a comma is needed after 'list' for clarity.

× I think the main reason why some people don't like making lists because they think that is a waste of time and their confidence in and their confidence that they can remember everything.

✓ I think the main reason why some people don't like making lists is that they think it is a waste of time and have confidence that they can remember everything.

The original sentence has a missing verb after 'lists' and an awkward phrase 'their confidence in and their confidence that'. The corrected sentence adds the verb 'is' to complete the clause and rephrases the confidence part for clarity and grammatical correctness.

× Well, personally, I prefer to make less on my mobile phone, which is very convenient and always accessible.

✓ Well, personally, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone, which is very convenient and always accessible.

The phrase 'make less' is incorrect; it should be 'make lists'. The preposition 'on' is correctly used with 'my mobile phone' to indicate the device used for making lists.

× Additionally, digital is are much easier to edit and organize, which helps me to stay efficient and sure that I don't forget anything about.

✓ Additionally, digital lists are much easier to edit and organize, which helps me to stay efficient and ensures that I don't forget anything.

The original sentence has a subject-verb agreement error with 'digital is are'. It should be 'digital lists are'. Also, the phrase 'forget anything about' is incomplete and should be 'forget anything'. The correction fixes these issues for grammatical accuracy and clarity.