List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答时语法和表达不够准确，句子结构不完整，且有重复词汇。建议简洁明了地表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me remember exactly what I need to buy and saves time.

제안: 回答内容不清晰，语法错误较多，表达逻辑混乱。建议直接回答问题，并用具体例子支持观点，注意时态和句子完整性。

예시: No, I don't make a list for work because I find it wastes time. For example, last week I completed my tasks without a list and it went well.

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不清，且逻辑连接不够自然。建议使用连词连接观点，并提供更具体的理由。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because it takes time. For instance, my friends avoid lists but still manage their work and studies effectively.

제안: 回答较为完整，但有语法错误和表达不流畅。建议注意句子结构，避免口语化表达，保持简洁。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because with technology, I can access them anytime and anywhere, which is very convenient.

× Yeah, I will make a list of my shop because I think it's a good way to to make sure that's what goods I will buy.

✓ Yeah, I make a list for my shopping because I think it's a good way to make sure what goods I will buy.

这里不应该用将来时态“will”，因为说话者描述的是习惯性动作，应该用一般现在时。此外，“of my shop”应改为“for my shopping”更符合表达习惯。

× For example, last week I work but don't make a list.

✓ For example, last week I worked but didn't make a list.

这里描述的是过去发生的事情，应该用过去时态“worked”和“didn't make”。

× It helps me improve my profession because I don't have spend.

✓ It helps me improve my profession because I don't have to spend.

“don't have spend”缺少不定式“to”，正确表达是“don't have to spend”，表示不需要花费。

× Because it's consuming time. For example, my friends don't like making these and it doesn't impede her work, her study.

✓ Because it consumes time. For example, my friends don't like making them and it doesn't impede their work or their study.

“it's consuming time”应改为“一般现在时”表达习惯，“my friends”是复数，代词应为“them”和“their”，保持一致。

× I think I prefer make a list on my because, you know, as the development of technology, we spend a lot of time on our mobile phone.

✓ I think I prefer to make a list on my phone because, you know, with the development of technology, we spend a lot of time on our mobile phones.

“prefer”后应接不定式“to make”，“on my”缺少名词“phone”，“as the development”应改为“with the development”更合适，且“mobile phone”应复数。