List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, sometime I make a list when I shop to don't waste many time.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I make a list for my. Studies I have scheduled.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I don't know, I think. This is not important for them and they think it's wasting your their time.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on my phone than on paper because it a more convenient. I always take my phone everywhere.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 60.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn nên tự nhiên hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên nói rõ ràng và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, ví dụ như sử dụng thì hiện tại đơn đúng cách và tránh lỗi sai về từ vựng như 'many time' nên là 'much time'.
예시: Yes, sometimes I make a list when I go shopping because it helps me save time and avoid forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 50.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh, tránh ngắt quãng và thêm chi tiết để làm câu trả lời phong phú hơn.
예시: Yes, I make a list for my studies because it helps me organize my tasks and manage my time effectively.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 55.0제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng các cụm từ không chắc chắn như 'I don't know, I think' và sửa lỗi ngữ pháp như 'wasting your their time'. Hãy trả lời rõ ràng và sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.
예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it's not important and believe it wastes their time.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 65.0제안: Bạn nên chú ý đến ngữ pháp, ví dụ như thiếu động từ 'is' trong câu 'it a more convenient'. Ngoài ra, hãy sử dụng liên từ để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lỗi nhỏ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.
예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient, and I always carry my phone with me.
문법
× Yes, sometime I make a list when I shop to don't waste many time.
✓ Yes, sometimes I make a list when I shop so I don't waste much time.
The word 'sometime' should be 'sometimes' to indicate frequency (plural). 'Don't' should be preceded by 'so' to indicate purpose. 'Many time' is incorrect; 'much time' is used with uncountable nouns like 'time'.
× Yes, I make a list for my. Studies I have scheduled.
✓ Yes, I make a list for my studies that I have scheduled.
The period after 'my' is incorrect and breaks the sentence. 'Studies' should not be capitalized here. The sentence needs to be connected properly for clarity.
× I don't know, I think. This is not important for them and they think it's wasting your their time.
✓ I don't know, I think this is not important for them and they think it's wasting their time.
The period after 'think' incorrectly splits the sentence. 'Your their time' is incorrect; 'their time' is the correct possessive pronoun here.
× I prefer to make a list on my phone than on paper because it a more convenient.
✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone rather than on paper because it is more convenient.
The phrase 'than on paper' should be preceded by 'rather' for correct comparison. 'It a more convenient' is missing the verb 'is'. 'Convenient' is an adjective and needs a linking verb.
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