List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答较为冗长且有重复表达，缺少清晰的主题句。建议回答时先直接回答问题，然后用简洁的句子补充细节，避免口语化的填充词。

예시: No, I don't usually make a list when I shop because I mostly shop online. The apps allow me to add items to my cart easily, so I can buy them whenever I want.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和表达不流畅，且句子较长且重复。建议使用更简洁的句子结构，明确表达观点，并避免重复。

예시: No, I don't make lists for work because I don't think they are necessary. Sometimes my parents ask me to, but I find it too restrictive and prefer to work more flexibly.

제안: 回答内容较好，但有口语化表达和不完整句子。建议使用更正式和完整的句子，并适当使用连接词使表达更连贯。

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer flexibility. They like to decide what to do first and next, which makes them feel freer than following a fixed list.

제안: 回答中有语法错误和不完整句子，表达不够清晰。建议使用完整句子，避免重复，并清楚说明理由。

예시: Although I don't like making lists, if I have to, I prefer writing them in a notebook. It's easier to check than on my phone, where I might get distracted.

× I don't actually make a list when I shop because I usually only do online shopping.

✓ I don't actually make a list when I shop because I usually only do online shopping.

该句中没有明显的动词+ing形式错误，保持原句。

× And you know, with the online shopping apps, you can just add anything you want to your shopping cart to your like there's this shopping bag that you have and you could just click the plus and add it to your bag and you could purchase it anytime you want.

✓ And you know, with the online shopping apps, you can just add anything you want to your shopping cart, like there's this shopping bag that you have, and you can just click the plus and add it to your bag, and you can purchase it anytime you want.

原句中存在句子结构混乱，缺少逗号分隔，导致理解困难。应使用逗号分隔不同部分，使句子更清晰。

× But sometimes my parents made me do that like they forced me to write it down.

✓ But sometimes my parents make me do that, like they force me to write it down.

这里描述的是习惯性动作，应使用一般现在时而非过去时。

× But even though I do, I wouldn't just I still wouldn't do as it says because I find it really restrictive and that's not just not my style of dealing with things.

✓ But even though I do, I still wouldn't do as it says because I find it really restrictive and that's just not my style of dealing with things.

原句中“that's not just not my style”结构混乱，重复使用否定词，应调整为“that's just not my style”。

× Well, I believe they might have the same personality as me. Because they don't want to.

✓ Well, I believe they might have the same personality as me because they don't want to.

“Because”不应单独成句，应与前句合并形成完整句子。

× They get to choose what they wanna do 1st and what they wanna do next because it feels free to do that, like to do things in that way rather than making the list.

✓ They get to choose what they want to do first and what they want to do next because it feels free to do that, like doing things in that way rather than making a list.

“wanna”应改为正式“want to”，“1st”应写为“first”。“like to do things”改为“like doing things”更自然。

× Even though I don't like making lists, but if I really have to do it, I would say I do it.

✓ Even though I don't like making lists, if I really have to do it, I would say I do it.

“Even though”和“but”不能同时使用，二者功能重复，应去掉“but”。

× I write it down in the in a notebook because I think it's easier to check it that way.

✓ I write it down in a notebook because I think it's easier to check it that way.

“in the in a notebook”重复且错误，应去掉多余的“the”。

× Because if I write it on my phone, every time I wanna see the list and I open my phone, I will just jump into some.

✓ If I write it on my phone, every time I want to see the list and open my phone, I will just jump into something else.

句首不应以“Because”开头，且“wanna”应改为正式“want to”，“jump into some”不完整，应补充为“jump into something else”。