List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Essayez d'utiliser des phrases plus naturelles et évitez les erreurs grammaticales. Par exemple, au lieu de "I'll never do a list", dites "I never make a list". Aussi, ajoutez une raison claire pour rendre votre réponse plus complète.

예시: No, I never make a list when I shop because I enjoy browsing and picking whatever catches my eye.

제안: Faites attention à la structure de la phrase et à la grammaire. Par exemple, "I'm naturally disorganized person" devrait être "I'm a naturally disorganized person". Clarifiez aussi vos idées pour que la réponse soit plus cohérente.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because I am naturally a disorganized person. Making lists helps me prioritize my tasks and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Faites attention à la prononciation et au choix des mots, par exemple "making leaks" devrait être "making lists". Utilisez des mots plus précis et développez un peu plus votre réponse.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it boring and unnecessary. However, I find it very helpful for staying organized.

제안: Votre réponse est claire mais pourrait être améliorée en ajoutant des détails spécifiques et en utilisant des mots de liaison pour plus de fluidité.

예시: I usually prefer to make lists on my phone because I always have it with me, so it's more practical and convenient than using paper.

× Unfortunately I'll never do a list when I shop because I love to go in a shop and take whatever I want.

✓ Unfortunately, I never make a list when I shop because I love to go into a shop and take whatever I want.

The modal verb 'will' is incorrectly used with 'never' in this context. Instead, the simple present tense 'never make' is appropriate to express habitual action. Also, 'do a list' is incorrect; the correct collocation is 'make a list'. Additionally, 'go in a shop' should be 'go into a shop' to correctly express movement into a place.

× Yes, I'm always making a list for my work because I'm naturally disorganized person making the least healthy prioritize my tasks and ensure that I don't forget anything important.

✓ Yes, I'm always making a list for my work because I'm a naturally disorganized person, making the list helps me prioritize my tasks and ensure that I don't forget anything important.

The sentence lacks the article 'a' before 'naturally disorganized person'. Also, 'making the least healthy prioritize' is incorrect and unclear; it should be 'making the list helps me prioritize' to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× I think that some people don't like making leaks because they find it boring and useless, but like I said earlier, in my case it's really helpful.

✓ I think that some people don't like making lists because they find it boring and useless, but like I said earlier, in my case it's really helpful.

The word 'leaks' is a typo or incorrect word choice; the correct word is 'lists' to match the context of making lists.