List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid grammatical errors and redundancy. For example, "much more easier" should be "much easier" and "it prevent me" should be "it prevents me". Also, try to use linking words like "because" or "so" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because it is very convenient and helps me avoid impulsive buying. This way, I can buy everything I planned for, which saves both my money and time.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some grammatical mistakes and unclear phrases. For example, "fulfill or complete my task in a right time" should be "complete my tasks on time" and "It also prevent my workload" is unclear; you might mean it reduces your workload. Use linking words like "so" or "therefore" to connect ideas.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me stay focused and organized. Therefore, I can complete my tasks on time before the deadline, which reduces my workload.

제안: Your answer is relevant but a bit repetitive and has grammatical errors. For example, "cannot manage their fund" should be "cannot manage their funds". Also, avoid repeating "they don't like making lists" twice. Use linking words like "because" and "so" to improve coherence.

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they find them restrictive. Because of this, they cannot buy things spontaneously or manage their funds well, so they prefer not to make lists.

제안: Your answer is understandable but starts abruptly and has some repetition and grammatical errors. For example, "Or your phone" is incomplete, and "We we might lose paper" should be "We might lose paper". Try to start with a clear topic sentence and use linking words like "because" and "so" to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because we live in a digital age and carry our phones everywhere. It is more convenient and secure since we might lose paper lists, but our phones are usually safe with us.

× it makes my life much more easier

✓ it makes my life much easier

The word 'easier' is already a comparative adjective, so adding 'more' is redundant and incorrect. Use 'much easier' instead of 'much more easier'.

× this way it prevent me from making impulsive buying decision

✓ this way it prevents me from making impulsive buying decisions

The subject 'it' requires the verb to be in third person singular form 'prevents'. Also, 'decision' should be plural 'decisions' to match the context.

× I always make a list when I go for shopping

✓ I always make a list when I go shopping

The phrase 'go shopping' does not require the preposition 'for'. Saying 'go for shopping' is incorrect.

× It also prevent my workload

✓ It also prevents my workload

The subject 'It' requires the verb to be in third person singular form 'prevents'.

× I can fulfill or complete my task in a right time before deadline

✓ I can fulfill or complete my tasks at the right time before the deadline

'Task' should be plural 'tasks' to match the context. Use 'at the right time' instead of 'in a right time'. Also, 'the deadline' requires the definite article 'the'.

× So they don't like making lists in my personal opinion

✓ So, in my personal opinion, they don't like making lists

The phrase 'in my personal opinion' should be placed at the beginning or middle of the sentence for clarity and correct pronoun use.

× Or your phone

✓ On my phone

The phrase 'Or your phone' is incomplete and does not answer the question properly. It should be 'On my phone' to indicate preference.

× We we might lose paper but we carry our phone with safety, so it is secure

✓ We might lose paper, but we carry our phone safely, so it is secure

The repeated 'We' is an error. 'With safety' should be 'safely' as an adverb modifying 'carry'. Also, a comma is needed before 'but'.