List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to avoid redundancy and use more varied vocabulary. For example, instead of repeating 'helps', you can use synonyms or rephrase sentences. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it makes the process more enjoyable and reduces my stress. Moreover, it ensures that I don't forget any essential items I need to purchase.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but could be improved by using more natural phrasing and linking words. Also, avoid repeating similar phrases like 'according to the deadline' twice. Try to combine ideas for better coherence.

예시: Yes, I always create a prioritized to-do list for my work. For instance, on busy days, I schedule tasks based on their deadlines, which helps me finish my work on time and make a positive impression on others.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and contains grammatical errors. Try to express your ideas more clearly and avoid vague phrases like 'this will start'. Also, use linking words to connect your points logically.

예시: I believe some people dislike making lists because they find it restrictive and prefer to shop spontaneously. Others may think it's unnecessary. However, I think this attitude is mistaken because lists help organize tasks efficiently.

제안: Your answer is relevant but can be improved by correcting grammar and using more natural expressions. Also, try to use linking words to connect your ideas smoothly.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because I can carry paper everywhere without worrying about battery life. Additionally, using paper feels less stressful for me.

× I always make a list for my work according to the priority basis.

✓ I always make a list for my work based on priority.

The phrase 'according to the priority basis' is incorrect. The correct preposition and phrase is 'based on priority' to express the idea of prioritizing tasks. Using 'according to' with 'basis' is redundant and ungrammatical.

× It helps me to complete my work before deadline.

✓ It helps me to complete my work before the deadline.

The noun 'deadline' requires the definite article 'the' when referring to a specific deadline. Omitting 'the' is a common article error related to preposition and article usage.

× It helps to leave a good impression on people.

✓ It helps to leave a good impression with people.

The correct preposition to use with 'leave a good impression' is 'with' rather than 'on' when referring to people. 'Leave an impression on' is also acceptable but 'with' is more common in this context. However, 'on' is not strictly incorrect, so this is a minor stylistic suggestion.

× I think some people don't like making lists because they think it is more restrictive and they like to be spontaneous on buying goods or they find it unnecessary or extra.

✓ I think some people don't like making lists because they find it more restrictive, prefer to be spontaneous when buying goods, or consider it unnecessary or excessive.

The original sentence is long and awkward with incorrect conjunctions and prepositions. 'Spontaneous on buying goods' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'spontaneous when buying goods.' Also, 'extra' is not appropriate here; 'excessive' or 'unnecessary' fits better. The sentence is improved by breaking ideas clearly and using correct conjunctions.

× But I would like to suggest them this is a wrong attitude and this will start.

✓ But I would like to suggest to them that this is a wrong attitude and it should change.

The original sentence is unclear and ungrammatical. 'Suggest them this' is incorrect; the correct form is 'suggest to them that.' Also, 'this will start' is incomplete and unclear; likely the intended meaning is that the attitude should change or stop. The correction clarifies the meaning and corrects sentence structure.

× I prefer to make a list of paper rather than on phone.

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper rather than on my phone.

The phrase 'make a list of paper' is incorrect; the correct preposition is 'on paper.' Also, 'on phone' should be 'on my phone' to specify possession. Prepositions and possessive pronouns are necessary here for correct meaning.