List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Try to avoid redundancy by not repeating the same idea twice. Also, improve sentence structure and grammar for clarity. For example, say "I like to make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything."

예시: Yes, I like to make a shopping list to ensure I don't forget anything. For instance, last week I made a list to buy ingredients for cooking.

제안: Improve grammar and clarity by using correct verb tenses and sentence structure. Also, use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me organize my tasks. For example, last week I completed my project successfully by following my list.

제안: Avoid repeating phrases like "I think" twice. Use correct grammar such as "waste their time making a list." Also, use linking words to connect reasons logically.

예시: In my opinion, some people dislike making lists because they think it wastes time and feels inflexible or uncomfortable for them.

제안: Improve grammar by using plural forms and articles correctly, e.g., "an application for making lists" and "manage my tasks." Also, add linking words for coherence.

예시: Personally, I prefer to make lists on my mobile phone because it has applications for making lists, and I use them every day to manage my tasks.

× For example, I last week I made a shopping list to buy ingredients.

✓ For example, last week I made a shopping list to buy ingredients.

The phrase 'I last week I made' contains a redundancy with the subject 'I' repeated unnecessarily. The correct sentence should omit the first 'I' to maintain proper sentence structure.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and it's actually work because it helps me to organize the plan that I need to do.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it actually works because it helps me to organize the plan that I need to do.

The verb 'work' should be in the third person singular present tense 'works' to agree with the singular subject 'it'. This is a subject-verb agreement issue.

× For example, last week I do my project and it helps me.

✓ For example, last week I did my project and it helped me.

The action happened in the past ('last week'), so the verbs should be in the past tense: 'do' becomes 'did' and 'helps' becomes 'helped' to maintain tense consistency.

× In my opinion, I think they think that it is waste their time to making a list.

✓ In my opinion, I think they think that it is a waste of their time to make a list.

The phrase 'waste their time to making' is incorrect. The correct expression is 'a waste of their time' followed by the infinitive 'to make'. This corrects the preposition and verb form usage.

× But some people may think it is not flexible, it is uncomfortable for them.

✓ But some people may think it is not flexible; it is uncomfortable for them.

The original sentence is a run-on sentence. Using a semicolon or conjunction improves sentence structure. The preposition 'for' is correctly used here.

× Personally, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it has an application for making list and I use it every day to manage my task.

✓ Personally, I prefer to make a list on my mobile phone because it has an application for making lists and I use it every day to manage my tasks.

The nouns 'list' and 'task' should be plural ('lists' and 'tasks') to correctly refer to multiple items, matching the context of daily use and management.