List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is good but there are some grammar mistakes and redundancy. Try to use correct verb tenses and avoid repeating phrases. Also, keep your answer concise and clear. For example, say "I always make a shopping list because it saves time and reduces stress."

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it saves time and helps me remember everything I need to buy, which reduces my stress.

제안: Your answer is clear but some grammar errors and awkward phrases reduce clarity. Use correct verb forms and linking words to improve coherence. For example, say "I always make a prioritized list for my work, which helps me save time and reduce stress."

예시: Yes, I always make a prioritized list for my work. For example, on busy days, I list tasks by importance and complete them accordingly, which saves time and reduces stress.

제안: There is a vocabulary mistake ('leaves' instead of 'lists') and some grammar errors. Also, try to use linking words to connect ideas smoothly. For example, say "Some people dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming and unnecessary; however, I think lists help prevent forgetting important items."

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they think it takes too much time and is unnecessary. However, I believe lists are very helpful because they ensure we don't forget what to buy.

제안: Your answer is understandable but has some repetition and grammar mistakes. Try to avoid repeating words and use clearer sentence structures. For example, say "I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient, secure, and always with me."

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is convenient, secure, and I always have my phone with me, so I don't worry about losing the list.

× Yes, I always make a list when I saw.

✓ Yes, I always make a list when I shop.

The verb 'saw' is past tense and does not fit the present habitual action described by 'always make'. The correct verb should be 'shop' to indicate the present tense activity.

× Whenever I make my make a list of goods I have to buy I don't have to stress for.

✓ Whenever I make my list of goods I have to buy, I don't have to stress.

The sentence has redundancy ('make my make a list') and an incorrect preposition 'for' at the end. Removing the extra 'make' and the preposition improves clarity and correctness.

× Yes, I always make a list for my work and it always worked like a magic.

✓ Yes, I always make a list for my work and it always works like magic.

The phrase 'always make' indicates present habitual action, so 'worked' should be in present tense 'works' to maintain tense consistency. Also, 'like a magic' should be 'like magic' (idiomatic expression).

× I make a list of work in a hierarchical order and I perform the work based on its importance and it always helps me saving my time and it is less stressful so it helps every time.

✓ I make a list of work in hierarchical order and perform the work based on its importance; it always helps me save time and is less stressful, so it helps every time.

The phrase 'helps me saving' is incorrect; it should be 'helps me save' because 'help' is followed by the base verb. Also, 'in a hierarchical order' is better as 'in hierarchical order' for natural phrasing.

× I believe some people don't like making leaves because they believe it is time consuming and unnecessary.

✓ I believe some people don't like making lists because they believe it is time consuming and unnecessary.

The word 'leaves' is incorrect here; the intended word is 'lists'. Using the correct noun clarifies the meaning.

× However, in my personal opinion it is very convenient to make a list rather than just go for shopping without list because it make sure we don't forget the things we have to buy.

✓ However, in my personal opinion it is very convenient to make a list rather than just go shopping without a list because it makes sure we don't forget the things we have to buy.

The phrase 'go for shopping' is incorrect; it should be 'go shopping'. Also, 'without list' needs an article 'a list'. The verb 'make' should be 'makes' to agree with singular subject 'it'.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and we can carry our phone everywhere we go and we don't have to worry about losing that piece of paper because we we keep our phone with safety and it is more secure than writing in papers.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is convenient and we can carry our phone everywhere we go and we don't have to worry about losing that piece of paper because we keep our phone safely and it is more secure than writing on paper.

The phrase 'keep our phone with safety' is incorrect; it should be 'keep our phone safely'. Also, 'writing in papers' should be 'writing on paper' as 'on' is the correct preposition for writing surfaces.