List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn nên rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn, tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không chính xác và câu dài dòng. Bạn nên sử dụng câu chủ đề rõ ràng, sau đó giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể và sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I often forget important items. Moreover, having a list helps me reduce stress during the trip.

제안: Bạn cần tránh những từ không chính xác hoặc không rõ nghĩa trong câu trả lời. Hãy tập trung vào việc trình bày ý một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng câu đơn giản và từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn.

예시: Yes, I usually make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently. This way, I don't forget anything and can focus on one task at a time.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều từ không phù hợp hoặc không đúng ngữ cảnh. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp, sử dụng từ vựng phù hợp và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, tránh nói lặp lại hoặc dùng từ không chính xác.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it stressful or time-consuming. They may prefer to remember things naturally without writing them down.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và tránh những từ không rõ nghĩa. Hãy trình bày ý kiến của bạn một cách rõ ràng, sử dụng từ nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc và dễ hiểu hơn.

예시: I prefer making lists on paper rather than on my phone because writing by hand helps me remember things better. Also, it feels more convenient and simple when I am on the go.

× I usually make a list for something because I think uh, I can't remember anything important to buy and beside it is also help me to reduce stress during a certain trip.

✓ I usually make a list of things because I think, uh, I can't remember anything important to buy and besides, it also helps me to reduce stress during a certain trip.

The preposition 'for' is incorrectly used with 'make a list'; the correct preposition is 'of'. 'Beside' should be 'besides' to mean 'in addition'. Also, 'help' should be 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'it'.

× it helps me stay organization and Manitou's metamorph effectively resemble a rather on the task and need to accomplish during the day.

✓ it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively to focus on the tasks I need to accomplish during the day.

The phrase 'stay organization' is incorrect; the adjective 'organized' should be used. The rest of the sentence contains unclear and incorrect words; 'Manitou's metamorph' and 'resemble a rather on the task' are nonsensical and should be replaced with 'manage my time effectively to focus on the tasks'.

× but allow me to focus on one task at a time.

✓ but it allows me to focus on one task at a time.

The sentence is missing the subject 'it' and the verb should be 'allows' to agree with the singular subject. This is a subject-verb agreement and sentence structure issue.

× One more time, uh, well, in my opinion, cerebral tongue by making a list because it can be temperature, presuming it requires a chair of Earth, for example, they might find it, but also pouring the right thing down and report to remember sounds naturally. Additionally, the river fields.

✓ Well, in my opinion, some people don't like making a list because it can be time-consuming and requires effort. For example, they might find it boring to write things down and prefer to remember things naturally. Additionally, they may feel restricted by lists.

The original sentence is incoherent and contains many incorrect words and phrases. It needs to be rewritten for clarity and grammatical correctness, maintaining the intended meaning.

× I from making a list on paper rather than on my phone because I find it, uh, easy all to remember things in beside us when I write them down by hand and I it's feel more comi convenient but simple.

✓ I prefer making a list on paper rather than on my phone because I find it easier to remember things when I write them down by hand, and it feels more comfortable and simple.

The phrase 'I from making' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer making'. 'Easy all to remember things in beside us' is incorrect; it should be 'easier to remember things'. 'I it's feel more comi convenient but simple' is incorrect and should be 'it feels more comfortable and simple'. Prepositions and word choice errors are corrected.