List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is generally clear but contains some grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, such as "help me to don't waste" and "as I don't get distracted." Try to use correct verb forms and more natural expressions. Also, keep your answer concise and avoid redundancy.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I shop because it helps me save time and ensures I don't forget anything important.

제안: Your answer has many hesitations and repetitions which affect fluency. Try to organise your ideas clearly with a topic sentence and supporting details, and avoid filler words like "umm" and repeated phrases. Use linking words to connect ideas logically.

예시: Yes, I use my diary to set weekly goals and prioritise tasks. If I can't finish everything, I carry over the remaining work to the next week.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more concise and natural. Avoid phrases like "I think that is something that you should ask to them." Instead, express your opinion directly and use clearer linking words to contrast ideas.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and live in the moment, rather than following a strict routine.

제안: Your answer covers the question well but contains some unclear phrases like "that is depends if it's about you know to at least from the supermarket and groceries." Try to use clearer sentence structures and avoid filler words. Also, use linking words to contrast your preferences smoothly.

예시: It depends on the situation. For shopping, I prefer using my phone so I don't have to carry paper. However, for work, I like writing notes in my diary to avoid distractions from my phone, especially when I'm with my boss.

× I consider myself an organized person so if I have a list that help me to don't waste my time when I am shopping and don't forget things as I don't get distracted.

✓ I consider myself an organized person so if I have a list that helps me not to waste my time when I am shopping and not forget things as I don't get distracted.

The verb 'help' should be in the third person singular form 'helps' to agree with the singular subject 'a list'. Also, 'to don't waste' is incorrect; the correct form is 'not to waste' because 'help' is followed by the base form or 'to' plus base form without 'do/does'. This correction improves subject-verb agreement and correct verb form usage.

× I have my diary where I'd like to set my goal for the week, umm, and I, I write down all the priorities. Umm, so I am, I am, I am, I take what I have the time to finish and I set the goal for the following week if I had the chance to finish with the work.

✓ I have my diary where I'd like to set my goals for the week, umm, and I write down all the priorities. Umm, so I take the time I have to finish and I set the goal for the following week if I have the chance to finish the work.

The phrase 'if I had the chance' is past tense and should be 'if I have the chance' to match the present/future context. Also, 'I am, I am, I am' is unnecessary repetition and removed for clarity. 'I take what I have the time to finish' is awkward; corrected to 'I take the time I have to finish' for natural expression.

× Well that is depends if it's about you know to at least from the supermarket and groceries.

✓ Well, that depends if it's about, you know, at least from the supermarket and groceries.

The phrase 'that is depends' is incorrect; 'that depends' is correct. The preposition 'to at least from' is incorrect and confusing; it is corrected to 'at least from' to clarify meaning. Also, commas added for natural pauses.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone so I don't need to carry a paper while I am shopping.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone so I don't need to carry paper while I am shopping.

The word 'a paper' is incorrect because 'paper' in this context is uncountable; the article 'a' should be removed. This correction improves the correct use of quantifiers and articles with uncountable nouns.

× But it's about work. I prefer to have my notes on a paper in my diary because I don't like to be distracted with phones where I am in front of my boss.

✓ But if it's about work, I prefer to have my notes on paper in my diary because I don't like to be distracted by phones when I am in front of my boss.

The phrase 'it's about work' is better expressed as 'if it's about work' for clarity. 'On a paper' is incorrect; 'on paper' is the correct phrase. 'Distracted with phones' should be 'distracted by phones' to use the correct preposition. 'Where I am in front of my boss' is awkward; 'when I am in front of my boss' is more natural.