List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有點不自然且語法錯誤，建議你使用更簡潔且正確的句子結構，並避免冗長。可以嘗試先直接回答問題，再用一兩句話說明原因。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me save time. When I arrive at the store, I can quickly find everything I need and finish shopping within 30 minutes.

제안: 回答中有許多語法和用詞錯誤，建議你用簡單明確的句子表達，並使用連接詞使句子更流暢。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me save a lot of time. I also use an app to track my tasks, and I enjoy crossing them off when I finish.

제안: 回答中語法錯誤較多，且內容不夠具體。建議你用更清楚的句子說明原因，並用連接詞連接想法。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. Others believe they can remember everything they need to do. Also, some prefer not to write things down to keep their plans private.

제안: 回答中有語法錯誤，建議你使用正確的時態和句型，並保持句子簡潔。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because I always carry it with me. This way, I can quickly take it out and add notes whenever I need to.

× Yes, preparing at least once I shop helps me reduce my time because once I got there I grab everything I need in my list so I can then within 30 minutes.

✓ Yes, preparing at least once before I shop helps me reduce my time because once I get there I grab everything I need from my list so I can finish within 30 minutes.

The phrase 'preparing at least once I shop' is incorrect; it should be 'preparing at least once before I shop' to indicate the time correctly. Also, 'once I got there' should be 'once I get there' to maintain present tense consistency. 'Grab everything I need in my list' should be 'grab everything I need from my list' because 'from' is the correct preposition here. Finally, 'so I can then within 30 minutes' is incomplete; it should be 'so I can finish within 30 minutes.' These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.

× Yes, preparing a list can make me reducing a lot of my time.

✓ Yes, preparing a list can help me reduce a lot of my time.

The phrase 'make me reducing' is incorrect; after 'make' the base form of the verb should be used, so 'make me reduce' or better 'help me reduce' is appropriate. Also, 'reduce a lot of my time' is awkward; 'help me reduce a lot of my time' is clearer. This correction fixes verb form usage and improves sentence clarity.

× I also use an app to click track download my text because it can help me easing a lot of multiple text walk.

✓ I also use an app to track and download my texts because it can help me ease a lot of multiple text work.

The phrase 'click track download my text' is unclear and likely incorrect; it should be 'track and download my texts.' 'Help me easing' is incorrect; after 'help' the base form 'ease' should be used. 'Multiple text walk' seems to be a typo or mishearing; 'multiple text work' makes more sense. These corrections address verb form and preposition usage for clarity.

× So one I am then I enjoy crossing things.

✓ So once I am done, I enjoy crossing things off.

The phrase 'So one I am then' is likely a mishearing of 'So once I am done.' Also, 'crossing things' should be 'crossing things off' to correctly express the action of marking items as completed on a list. This correction fixes verb form and phrase usage for clarity.

× Because some people think making this require a lot of time.

✓ Because some people think making this requires a lot of time.

The verb 'require' should agree with the singular subject 'making this,' so it should be 'requires.' This is a subject-verb agreement issue improving sentence structure.

× Some people think that they can remember everything what they need to do every day.

✓ Some people think that they can remember everything they need to do every day.

The word 'what' is unnecessary and incorrect here; 'everything they need to do' is the correct phrase. Removing 'what' corrects the pronoun usage.

× Also send Other people think they don't need a list and they want to keep a secret.

✓ Also, some other people think they don't need a list and want to keep it a secret.

'Send Other people' is incorrect; it should be 'some other people.' Also, 'keep a secret' needs an object; 'keep it a secret' is correct. These corrections fix pronoun and article usage.

× I'm before making a list on my phone because most of the time I was carrying the phone with me all the time so I can easily take out of my pocket and taking notes immediately.

✓ I prefer making a list on my phone because most of the time I carry my phone with me, so I can easily take it out of my pocket and take notes immediately.

'I'm before making' is incorrect; it should be 'I prefer making.' 'I was carrying' should be 'I carry' to maintain present tense. 'Take out of my pocket' needs an object: 'take it out of my pocket.' 'Taking notes' should be parallel with 'take notes.' These corrections fix verb tense, pronoun, and sentence structure errors.

× I can also write it down in my phone whenever I need it.

✓ I can also write it down on my phone whenever I need to.

The preposition 'in' is incorrect here; 'on my phone' is the correct phrase. Also, 'whenever I need it' is vague; 'whenever I need to' is clearer. This correction addresses preposition and sentence clarity.