List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: You dey try well, but your answer get some small grammar wahala and e no too clear. Try to dey use simple and correct sentences, and avoid repeating the same idea. Also, make your answer short and direct, no need to add too much. For example, you fit talk say, "Yes, I make a list when I shop to avoid impulse buying and to stay within my budget."

예시: Yes, I make a list when I shop to avoid impulse buying and to stay within my budget. This way, I can shop quickly and not forget anything important.

제안: Your answer dey okay but e get small repetition and the last "Also yes" no clear. Try to dey more precise and avoid repeating yourself. Use linking words to connect your ideas well. For example, you fit say, "Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively."

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organized and manage my time effectively. This way, I can complete my tasks on time without stress.

제안: Your answer get good idea but e too repetitive and no clear structure. Try to avoid filler words like "umm" and repeat yourself. Use linking words to make your answer smooth. For example, you fit say, "I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be more flexible and do things spontaneously."

예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be more flexible and do things spontaneously. Everyone has their own way of working, so lists may not suit everyone.

제안: Your answer is good but a bit long and informal. Try to use clearer sentences and linking words to connect your ideas. For example, you fit say, "I prefer making lists on my phone because it can send me reminders and I always have my phone with me, so it's more convenient."

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it can send me reminders and I always have my phone with me, so it's more convenient and helps me stay organized.

× Yes, I make a list from my work because it makes me more organized and I am always able to manage my time effectively.

✓ Yes, I make a list for my work because it makes me more organized and I am always able to manage my time effectively.

The preposition 'from' is incorrectly used here. The correct preposition to indicate purpose or relation is 'for'. So, 'make a list for my work' is correct, meaning the list is related to work tasks.

× Yes, I make a list when I shop that's to avoid impulse buying and miss staying in my budget and also just to make things fast.

✓ Yes, I make a list when I shop to avoid impulse buying, to stay within my budget, and also just to make things faster.

The phrase 'miss staying in my budget' is incorrect; it should be 'to stay within my budget'. Also, 'make things fast' should be 'make things faster' to correctly use the comparative adverb form. These corrections improve clarity and grammatical accuracy.