Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because that help me remember what I need to buy so I won't be able to forgot something important.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I usually make A to do list for my work. With doing that it helps me organize my texts and keeps me keeps me focused like writing things down clearly can.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think some people just think just think it's unnecessary, like they just keep things in their head and go with their flaws. Everyone has their own rhythm.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
Mostly. Mostly I make a list on my phone because writing things on the paper I tend to lose it and I have. I have got a few apps that help me organize the task and I can set digital reminders to.
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 70.0제안: 你的回答表达了基本意思,但存在语法错误和用词不当,如“that help me”应为“that helps me”,“won't be able to forgot”应为“won't forget”。建议注意动词时态和形式的正确使用,同时避免冗余表达。
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before going to the store because it helps me remember what I need to buy, so I don't forget anything important.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答中存在语法错误和重复,如“A to do list”应为“a to-do list”,“keeps me keeps me”重复。表达不够清晰,建议简化句子结构,避免重复,并使用更准确的词汇。
예시: Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work. It helps me organize my tasks and stay focused because writing things down makes everything clearer.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中有重复“just think just think”,且“go with their flaws”表达不准确,可能想表达“go with their flow”。建议注意用词准确性,避免重复,并提供更具体的理由。
예시: I think some people find making lists unnecessary because they prefer to keep things in their head and go with their own flow. Everyone has their own way of managing tasks.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 65.0제안: 回答中有重复“Mostly. Mostly”,句子不完整且断断续续。建议练习连贯表达,避免重复,并完整表达原因和细节。
예시: Mostly, I make lists on my phone because I tend to lose paper lists. I also use apps that help me organize tasks and set digital reminders.
× Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because that help me remember what I need to buy so I won't be able to forgot something important.
✓ Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because that helps me remember what I need to buy so I won't forget something important.
这里的主语是单数的'that',谓语动词应该用第三人称单数形式'helps',而不是'help'。另外,'won't be able to forgot'中'forgot'应为动词原形'forget',因为情态动词后接动词原形。
× Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because that help me remember what I need to buy so I won't be able to forgot something important.
✓ Yeah, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store because that helps me remember what I need to buy so I won't forget something important.
'forgot'是过去式,但在情态动词'won't'后应使用动词原形'forget',这是情态动词的语法规则。
× Yes, I usually make A to do list for my work.
✓ Yes, I usually make a to-do list for my work.
'to do list'是一个固定短语,应该写作'to-do list',且前面的冠词应为小写'a'。
× With doing that it helps me organize my texts and keeps me keeps me focused like writing things down clearly can.
✓ By doing that, it helps me organize my tasks and keeps me focused, like writing things down clearly can.
原句结构混乱,'With doing that'应改为'By doing that','texts'应为'tasks'更符合语境,'keeps me keeps me'重复,应去掉一个,句尾的'like writing things down clearly can'结构不完整,需调整。
× Mostly I make a list on my phone because writing things on the paper I tend to lose it and I have.
✓ Mostly I make a list on my phone because when writing things on paper, I tend to lose it and I have.
'writing things on the paper'中'the'不必要,应该是'writing things on paper',此外句子缺少连接词,需加'when'使句子完整。
× I have got a few apps that help me organize the task and I can set digital reminders to.
✓ I have got a few apps that help me organize tasks and I can set digital reminders.
'organize the task'应为复数'tasks','set digital reminders to'后面缺少宾语,应该去掉'to'。