List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping. It helps me stay organized and ensure I don't forget any important items.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
Yes, I usually make a list before I'm working. It's really useful to ensure I stay organized and saves me a lot of time.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
I think those people who don't like making lists, they can remember everything they want to buy. If make a list, make them feel restrict so they dislike make a list they want to.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I prefer to make a list on paper because this week can ensure I don't forget anything important. If I make a list on my phone, I can't remember better.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 85.0제안: 你的回答比较自然且直接，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达“make a list”和“organized”。建议在回答中加入具体例子或原因来丰富内容。
예시: Yes, I usually make a list before I go shopping because it helps me stay organized. For example, last week I bought all the ingredients for a new recipe without forgetting anything.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 80.0제안: 回答中语法有些不自然，如“before I'm working”应改为“before I start working”。建议使用连接词如“because”来解释原因，并提供具体细节。
예시: Yes, I usually make a list before I start working because it helps me prioritize tasks and saves a lot of time during the day.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 60.0제안: 回答语法错误较多，表达不够清晰。建议简化句子结构，使用正确的时态和词汇，并用连接词使逻辑更清楚。
예시: I think some people don't like making lists because they can remember everything they need. Also, making a list might make them feel restricted or pressured.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 55.0제안: 回答中存在语法和表达错误，如“this week can ensure”不合适。建议使用正确的表达方式，清楚说明原因，并使用连接词。
예시: I prefer to make a list on paper because it helps me remember things better. When I use my phone, I tend to ignore the list more easily.
문법
× Yes, I usually make a list before I'm working.
✓ Yes, I usually make a list before I work.
这里使用的是一般现在时态，表示习惯性动作，不能用现在进行时“I'm working”。应使用一般现在时“I work”。
× I think those people who don't like making lists, they can remember everything they want to buy.
✓ I think those people who don't like making lists can remember everything they want to buy.
句子中“those people who don't like making lists”和“they”重复，造成句子结构错误，应去掉“they”。
× If make a list, make them feel restrict so they dislike make a list they want to.
✓ If they make a list, it makes them feel restricted, so they dislike making a list even if they want to.
句子缺少主语，动词形式错误，且表达不完整。应补充主语“they”，动词用正确形式“makes”，形容词用过去分词“restricted”，动词短语用动名词“making”。
× I prefer to make a list on paper because this week can ensure I don't forget anything important.
✓ I prefer to make a list on paper because it can ensure I don't forget anything important.
“this week”用作主语不合适，应使用指代前文的“it”。
× If I make a list on my phone, I can't remember better.
✓ If I make a list on my phone, I can't remember as well.
“remember better”表达不自然，应使用比较结构“as well”来表达记忆效果较差。
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