List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答比较自然且内容完整，但可以使用更多连接词使句子更流畅，同时避免重复表达，比如“remember”和“keep me from spending too much money”可以合并表达。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me remember the items I need and prevents me from overspending. Usually, I write it down on paper before I go to the store.

제안: 回答内容具体且结构清晰，但可以使用更多连接词来增强连贯性，例如使用“because”或“so”连接句子，使表达更自然。

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me stay organised and focused. For example, I use a detailed app that reminds me about my tax, so I feel good when I check things off.

제안: 回答中有拼写错误（leads应为lists），且句子连接不够自然。建议注意拼写并使用连接词如“because”或“although”使句子更连贯。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time. Although they believe they can remember their tasks, they prefer to start working immediately.

제안: 回答中有语法错误（'on the paper'应为'on paper'，'when I'm down'用法不当），建议注意介词使用和短语搭配，同时避免模糊表达。

예시: I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down. It's easier for me to remember things that way, and I enjoy crossing items off the list when I finish them.

× Some people don't like making leads because they think it takes too much time.

✓ Some people don't like making lists because they think it takes too much time.

这里的'making leads'是错误的搭配，应该是'making lists'，因为题目和上下文都在谈论制作清单。'making'后面应接名词'lists'，而不是'leads'。

× They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing down, though.

✓ They believe they can remember what they need to do without writing it down, though.

短语'writing down'需要宾语，这里缺少宾语。正确用法是'writing it down'，表示把事情写下来。缺少宾语会导致句子不完整。

× I enjoy crossing things off the list when I'm down.

✓ I enjoy crossing things off the list when I'm done.

原句中的'down'用法错误，应该是'done'，表示完成。'when I'm done'意为'当我完成时'，符合语境。

× I prefer making lists on the paper because I like the feeling of writing things down.

✓ I prefer making lists on paper because I like the feeling of writing things down.

'on the paper'中的定冠词'the'不合适，表示泛指时不需要冠词，正确用法是'on paper'。