List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn khá dài và có một số lỗi lặp từ như "the the". Bạn nên trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng hơn và tránh lặp từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên và hiệu quả hơn.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me find items quickly by knowing which sections to visit in the supermarket.

제안: Bạn nên tránh lặp từ như "a a" và "the the". Câu trả lời cần rõ ràng hơn, có thể sử dụng liên từ để câu văn mạch lạc và thêm ví dụ cụ thể để làm rõ ý.

예시: Yes, I make a list for my work because it helps me prioritize tasks in order. For example, I always complete urgent reports before attending meetings.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi lặp từ, câu chưa hoàn chỉnh. Bạn nên luyện tập cách diễn đạt ý kiến rõ ràng, tránh lặp từ và hoàn thành câu đầy đủ.

예시: Some people may dislike making lists because they find it time-consuming or prefer to remember tasks mentally, but I find lists very helpful for prioritizing.

제안: Bạn nên tránh sử dụng từ ngữ không cần thiết như "uh" và hoàn thành câu đầy đủ. Câu trả lời nên mạch lạc hơn và sử dụng liên từ hợp lý để tăng tính logic.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone or laptop because I can tick off completed tasks and set notifications to remind me of important deadlines.

× A list would help us a lot when going through the items in the shops.

✓ A list would help us a lot when going through the items in the shop.

The word 'shops' is plural, but the context suggests referring to a single supermarket or shop. Using 'shop' (singular) is more appropriate here to indicate a specific place where items are bought.

× So if we have already come out with a list, we can point out the the sections in the supermarket that we need to go to in order to get the items and that would be very convenient.

✓ So if we have already come out with a list, we can point out the sections in the supermarket that we need to go to in order to get the items and that would be very convenient.

The phrase 'the the' is a repetition error and should be corrected to a single 'the'. This is a common typographical mistake and affects the clarity of the sentence.

× So in my work there is a a very clear priority within all of the the tasks that I need to do it in the sequence.

✓ So in my work there is a very clear priority within all of the tasks that I need to do in sequence.

The sentence contains repeated words 'a a' and 'the the' which are typographical errors. Also, 'do it in the sequence' is awkward; 'do in sequence' is more natural and grammatically correct.

× So giving out a list would help me to point out the most important one.

✓ So giving out a list would help me to point out the most important task.

The phrase 'the most important one' is vague. Since the context is about tasks, specifying 'task' clarifies the meaning and improves sentence precision.

× if I don't have a risk, I would be struggling with going through all of the tasks and I don't know which one is a higher priority.

✓ if I don't have a list, I will be struggling with going through all of the tasks and I won't know which one has a higher priority.

The modal verb 'would' is used incorrectly here for a real present/future condition. 'Will' is appropriate for real conditional sentences. Also, 'risk' is a wrong word; it should be 'list'. Additionally, 'don't know' should be 'won't know' to match the future conditional.

× Besides, I think they they they thought they think that building a list is a.

✓ Besides, I think they think that building a list is a good idea.

The sentence contains repeated words 'they they they' which is a typographical error. Also, the sentence is incomplete and unclear; completing it with 'a good idea' makes it meaningful.

× I always list on my electronic devices like my phones and all my laptops because, uh, there I have a tick box for all of the tasks list out so I can clearly track it.

✓ I always make a list on my electronic devices like my phone and all my laptops because there I have a tick box for all of the tasks listed out so I can clearly track them.

The verb 'list' is incorrectly used; 'make a list' is correct. 'Phones' should be singular 'phone' to match the context. 'Tasks list out' is incorrect; 'tasks listed out' is the correct past participle form. Also, 'track it' should be 'track them' to refer to multiple tasks.

× Besides, I can set some notification on the on each tasks if I'm missing one or something is uh.

✓ Besides, I can set some notifications on each task if I'm missing one or something is wrong.

'Notification' should be plural 'notifications' to match 'some'. 'On the on each tasks' is incorrect; it should be 'on each task'. 'Tasks' should be singular 'task' after 'each'. The sentence is incomplete; adding 'wrong' completes the thought.