List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is clear and relevant, but try to use more varied vocabulary and improve sentence structure for natural flow. Also, avoid minor grammatical errors like 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables'. Use linking words to connect ideas smoothly.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized. For instance, if I need to buy vegetables and spices, I list them specifically so I don't get distracted by other items. This way, I save time and avoid unnecessary purchases.

제안: Your answer is incomplete and unclear. Try to complete your sentences and explain your ideas fully. Use linking words to connect your thoughts and avoid repetition. Also, correct grammar mistakes like 'usual' should be 'usually' and 'works' should be 'tasks' or 'chores'.

예시: No, I don't usually make a list for my work because I am a housewife. I tend to remember all the tasks I need to do each day, so I manage without writing them down.

제안: Your answer has good ideas but lacks clarity and fluency. Avoid filler words like 'Good, good. So.' and complete your thoughts clearly. Use linking words to explain reasons logically and provide specific examples.

예시: Some people dislike making lists because they may feel unmotivated. For example, if they cannot complete all the tasks on the list, they might feel unproductive and discouraged.

제안: Your answer is relevant but the first sentence is confusing and the structure is awkward. Avoid asking the examiner a question; instead, state your preference clearly. Use linking words to explain reasons and improve sentence flow.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because there are many colorful and user-friendly apps. These apps make it easy to add or remove items, which helps me stay organized efficiently.

× I do prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me to stay organised. For example, if I plan to buy vegetable and spices, I make a list of them and I only buy them.

✓ I do prefer to make a list when I shop because it helps me to stay organised. For example, if I plan to buy vegetables and spices, I make a list of them and I only buy them.

The word 'vegetable' should be plural 'vegetables' because it refers to more than one item. In English, countable nouns need to be plural when referring to multiple items.

× I tend to remember all the works I have to do every day and.

✓ I tend to remember all the work I have to do every day.

The word 'works' is incorrect here; 'work' is an uncountable noun when referring to tasks or duties. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to be finished properly.

× Would you prefer to make a list on my phone? Because there are many apps which are colorful and enjoyable and those are very effective because it's easy to list an item or I am going to remove an item from the list in an app.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because there are many apps which are colorful and enjoyable, and those are very effective because it's easy to add an item or remove an item from the list in an app.

The original sentence incorrectly uses 'Would you prefer' which is a question form, but the student is answering. Also, 'list an item' is incorrect; the correct verb is 'add an item'. The sentence was also fragmented and needed to be combined for clarity.