List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is natural and clear, but it is a bit redundant and could be more concise. Try to avoid repeating the same idea and use linking words to make your answer more coherent. Also, aim to keep your answer within 4-5 sentences for better effectiveness.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list because I tend to forget things easily. Writing a list helps me organize my thoughts and ensures I don't miss anything important when I shop.

제안: Your answer is somewhat unclear and incomplete. Try to directly answer the question first, then provide supporting details with linking words. Avoid trailing off and make sure your sentences are complete to improve clarity and coherence.

예시: I don't usually make a list for my work, but I think it would be helpful. Writing a to-do list could help me manage my tasks better and save time during the workday.

제안: Your answer addresses the question but has some repetition and incomplete sentences. Try to use linking words to connect your ideas and provide more specific reasons or examples. Also, avoid repeating words and ensure your sentences are complete.

예시: I think some people dislike making lists because they find it distracting or prefer to keep their tasks in their memory. For example, some believe that writing things down interrupts their natural workflow.

제안: Your answer is natural and relevant but slightly repetitive. Try to use more varied vocabulary and linking words to make your answer more fluent and concise. Also, avoid filler phrases like 'you know' to sound more confident.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's always with me. Unlike paper and pen, which can be hard to find, my phone's notes app is convenient and easy to access anytime.

× I must write anything that I need to buy

✓ I must write everything that I need to buy

The word 'anything' is used in negative or interrogative sentences, but here the sentence is affirmative, so 'everything' is the correct quantifier to express all items needed.

× otherwise I'll forget lots of things

✓ otherwise I'll forget many things

'Lots of' is informal and usually used with countable plural nouns; 'many' is more appropriate in formal or neutral contexts and fits better here.

× I must do so in order to organize my mind in order to buy anything that I want

✓ I must do so in order to organize my mind and buy everything that I want

Using 'anything' in affirmative sentences is incorrect; 'everything' is appropriate. Also, 'in order to' is repeated unnecessarily; combining with 'and' improves sentence flow.

× writing A to do list on my workplace would be a great idea

✓ writing a to-do list at my workplace would be a great idea

The article 'A' should be lowercase 'a' and 'to do list' should be hyphenated as 'to-do list'. Also, the preposition 'on' is incorrect; 'at' is the correct preposition for 'workplace'.

× writing A to do list on my workplace would be a great idea

✓ writing a to-do list at my workplace would be a great idea

The preposition 'on' is incorrect when referring to 'workplace'; the correct preposition is 'at' to indicate location.

× Lots of people find it hard or distracting from their point of view

✓ Many people find it hard or distracting from their point of view

'Lots of' is informal; 'many' is more appropriate in this context to refer to a large number of people.

× They will be able to write their their tasks on their mind

✓ They will be able to keep their tasks in their mind

The phrase 'write their tasks on their mind' is incorrect; tasks cannot be written 'on' the mind. The correct expression is 'keep their tasks in their mind'. Also, 'their' is repeated mistakenly.

× there is no need to write them on a paper or

✓ there is no need to write them on paper

The article 'a' before 'paper' is unnecessary because 'paper' is an uncountable noun in this context.

× I prefer to make a list on paper or your phone

✓ I prefer to make a list on paper or on my phone

The preposition 'on' should be used before both 'paper' and 'phone' for parallel structure. Also, 'your phone' should be 'my phone' to match the speaker's perspective.

× I'm like them too

✓ I'm like them too

No correction needed; the pronoun usage is correct here.

× notes are not

✓ notes are not always available

The sentence is incomplete; adding 'always available' clarifies the meaning and corrects the adjective usage.