List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Your answer is brief and somewhat unclear. Try to respond directly with a complete sentence and provide a reason or example. Also, avoid redundancy and improve sentence structure for clarity.

예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list when I have many items to buy because it helps me stay organized and not forget anything.

제안: Your answer has tense inconsistency and lacks clarity. Use present tense for habitual actions and provide a clear explanation of how making lists helps you.

예시: Yes, I make a list when I have a lot of work to do, and it helps me manage my tasks efficiently.

제안: Your answer is confusing and unclear. Try to express the idea that some people prefer to rely on memory instead of lists, and explain why. Use clear and natural English.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they trust their memory and feel they can remember tasks without writing them down.

제안: Your answer is understandable but could be more natural and detailed. Use correct app names and explain why you prefer your phone over paper.

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone using the Notes app because it's convenient and I can easily edit or check my list anytime.

× Yes, I do when my list is very long.

✓ Yes, I do when my list is very long.

This sentence is grammatically correct in the present tense and fits the question context, so no correction is needed.

× Yes, when my work is longer, I made a list and it's worked for me.

✓ Yes, when my work is longer, I make a list and it works for me.

The question is in present tense, so the answer should also be in present tense. 'Made' and 'worked' are past tense verbs and should be changed to 'make' and 'works' to maintain tense consistency.

× When some people have a good brain, they don't want to remind something.

✓ When some people have a good memory, they don't want to be reminded of something.

The phrase 'have a good brain' is unnatural; 'have a good memory' is more appropriate. Also, 'don't want to remind something' is incorrect; it should be 'don't want to be reminded of something' to correctly express the intended meaning.

× They make a list then.

✓ They don't make a list then.

The original sentence contradicts the previous statement that some people don't like making lists. To clarify, it should be 'They don't make a list then.' Also, 'then' placement is acceptable but could be improved for clarity.

× In my personal opinion, I prefer to make a list on my phone in my keep notes.

✓ In my personal opinion, I prefer to make a list on my phone using my Keep Notes app.

The phrase 'in my keep notes' is incorrect. The correct preposition is 'using' to indicate the tool or app employed. Also, 'Keep Notes' should be capitalized as it is a proper noun (app name).