List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn cần rõ ràng và mạch lạc hơn. Bạn nên tránh lỗi ngữ pháp và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy thêm liên từ để câu trả lời tự nhiên hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ví dụ, bạn có thể nói rõ hơn về lợi ích của việc lập danh sách khi đi mua sắm.

예시: Yes, I always make a list when I go shopping because I find it difficult to remember all the items I need. Making a list helps me save time and avoid forgetting important groceries.

제안: Bạn nên sử dụng câu nối để câu trả lời mạch lạc hơn và tránh lặp từ. Ngoài ra, hãy cụ thể hơn về cách lập danh sách giúp bạn cân bằng công việc và học tập như thế nào.

예시: Yes, I always make a list for my work because it helps me balance my activities, entertainment, and studying. By having a timetable, I can manage my time better and stay motivated to improve my skills.

제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu rõ ràng và có nhiều lỗi ngữ pháp. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và giải thích lý do một cách cụ thể, tránh câu hỏi ngược lại người phỏng vấn. Hãy sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh và từ vựng phù hợp.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and do things as they feel, without following a strict plan.

제안: Bạn cần cải thiện ngữ pháp và cấu trúc câu để câu trả lời rõ ràng hơn. Hãy tránh lỗi từ và sắp xếp ý tưởng mạch lạc. Nên giải thích rõ lý do bạn thích dùng điện thoại hơn giấy.

예시: I prefer to make a list on my phone because it is more convenient. I often forget or lose paper lists, but with my phone, I can easily access the list anytime and it helps me stay organized.

× I can't remember many.

✓ I can't remember many things.

The word 'many' is a quantifier that needs to be followed by a plural noun. Here, 'many' alone is incomplete and should be followed by a noun like 'things' to make the sentence grammatically correct.

× I can't remember numerous groceries in the same time, so I need to make a list.

✓ I can't remember numerous groceries at the same time, so I need to make a list.

The correct preposition to use with 'the same time' is 'at' rather than 'in'. 'At the same time' is the standard phrase to indicate simultaneous events.

× It can saving time and avoid.

✓ It can save time and help avoid mistakes.

The phrase 'can saving' is incorrect; 'can' should be followed by the base form of the verb 'save'. Also, 'avoid' needs an object to be clear; adding 'help avoid mistakes' clarifies the meaning.

× Making a list for my work helps me balance between activities, entertainment and my studying.

✓ Making a list for my work helps me balance activities, entertainment, and my studying.

The verb 'balance' is transitive and does not require the preposition 'between' when listing more than two items. Removing 'between' makes the sentence grammatically correct.

× I think because they don't want to be in shape, they want to be their self, they want to do what they like and if they make list they need to be.

✓ I think it's because they don't want to be in shape; they want to be themselves, they want to do what they like, and if they make a list, they need to be organized.

The pronoun 'their self' is incorrect; the correct reflexive pronoun is 'themselves'. Also, 'make list' needs an article 'a list'. The sentence was incomplete and unclear, so 'they need to be organized' clarifies the intended meaning.

× Do you think around in the list?

✓ Do you think about the list?

The phrase 'think around in' is incorrect. The correct preposition to use with 'think' in this context is 'about'.

× I prefer to make a list on my pay on my phone because I always last thing.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because I always forget the last thing.

The phrase 'my pay' is likely a typo and should be 'my phone'. Also, 'I always last thing' is incomplete and should be 'I always forget the last thing' to be grammatically correct.

× If I make a list on paper I will forget or lost it on my phone.

✓ If I make a list on paper, I will forget or lose it; on my phone, I won't.

The verb 'lost' is past tense and incorrect here; it should be the base form 'lose' after 'will'. Also, the sentence needs punctuation for clarity.

× It is convenient to bring and I if I for I forgot I can open my and read so it is comfortable to me.

✓ It is convenient to carry, and if I forget, I can open my phone and read the list, so it is comfortable for me.

The original sentence is fragmented and unclear. Correcting the sentence structure and adding missing words like 'carry', 'phone', and 'for' improves clarity and grammatical correctness.