List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 답변이 명확하지 않고 문법적 오류가 많으며, 문장이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 또한, 내용이 중복되고 구체적인 예시나 이유가 부족합니다. 문장을 간결하고 명확하게 구성하고, 구체적인 이유와 예시를 포함하여 답변을 풍부하게 만드는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list because it helps me avoid buying unnecessary items. For example, last week I saved money by sticking to my list and not purchasing snacks I didn't need.

제안: 답변이 다소 어색하고 문법적 오류가 있으며, 문장 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 또한, 구체적인 예시나 이유가 부족합니다. 문장을 명확하게 구성하고, 연결어를 사용하여 논리적으로 답변을 전개하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Yes, I always make a to-do list for my work because it helps me stay organized. For instance, when I have a list, I can complete all my tasks on time without forgetting anything.

제안: 답변이 매우 불명확하고 문법적으로 부정확하며, 의미 전달이 어렵습니다. 질문에 직접적으로 답하고, 이유를 명확하고 구체적으로 설명하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or feel it limits their flexibility. For example, they may prefer to remember tasks mentally rather than writing them down.

제안: 답변이 다소 길고 문법적 오류가 있으며, 문장 연결이 자연스럽지 않습니다. 또한, 구체적인 이유와 비교가 부족합니다. 간결하고 명확하게 이유를 설명하고, 과거와 현재의 차이를 논리적으로 연결하는 연습이 필요합니다.

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it's more convenient and I can easily edit them. However, when I was in 10th grade, I used paper lists because I felt they were more reliable.

× As far as I'm concerned it yes because it's so crucial to buy other things.

✓ As far as I'm concerned, it is yes because it's so crucial to buy other things.

The sentence is missing the modal verb 'is' after 'it' to form a correct statement. Modal verbs or linking verbs are necessary to connect the subject and complement properly.

× If I don't make a list, I will buy.

✓ If I don't make a list, I will buy unnecessary things.

The sentence is incomplete and unclear. It needs an object to clarify what will be bought. Adding 'unnecessary things' completes the meaning.

× So by waste of things except.

✓ So I waste things unnecessarily.

The original sentence is fragmented and ungrammatical. It needs to be restructured to convey the intended meaning clearly.

× Of my list and there is gonna be horrible for my income.

✓ Because of my list, it is going to be horrible for my income.

The preposition 'Of' is incorrectly used at the beginning. 'Because of' is the correct preposition to indicate cause. Also, 'there is gonna be' is awkward; 'it is going to be' is better.

× I'm gonna do all of these things, just saying that time, but if I don't make a list, I'm gonna confuse it.

✓ I'm going to do all of these things at that time, but if I don't make a list, I'm going to get confused.

'Gonna' is informal; 'going to' is preferred in formal speech. 'Just saying that time' is unclear and corrected to 'at that time'. 'Confuse it' is incorrect; the correct phrase is 'get confused'.

× Is because of their humanity of our family.

✓ It is because of their upbringing in our family.

The sentence lacks a subject and verb. 'Is because of' should be 'It is because of'. 'Humanity of our family' is unclear; 'upbringing in our family' is more appropriate.

× Since there they were child.

✓ Since they were children.

'There' is unnecessary and incorrect. 'Child' should be plural 'children' to match the plural subject 'they'.

× They don't like. Make a list.

✓ They don't like to make a list.

The verb phrase is split incorrectly. 'Don't like' should be followed by the infinitive 'to make' to form a correct sentence.

× I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's more easier than paper.

✓ I prefer to make a list on my phone because it's easier than paper.

'More easier' is incorrect because 'easier' is already a comparative adjective. Using 'more' with a comparative adjective is redundant.

× But in the past, where I was 10th grade, I like to make a list on paper.

✓ But in the past, when I was in 10th grade, I liked to make a list on paper.

'Where' is incorrect; 'when' is used for time. 'Was 10th grade' should be 'was in 10th grade'. Also, past tense 'liked' is needed to match the time frame.

× It's gotta be more protective, I think.

✓ It has to be more protective, I think.

'Gotta' is informal; 'has to be' is more appropriate. Also, 'protective' may not be the correct adjective here; possibly 'secure' or 'safe' is intended, but correction is limited to grammar.