List— Part 1 채점 보고서
대화
Part 1
시험관
Do you make a list when you shop?
수험생
Only. Almost every year. The first is this happening. Lucy. Stop.
시험관
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
수험생
I do not agree with my left. Blue Spanish. Oh. My my. Highly weather.
시험관
Why don't some people like making lists?
수험생
Because they feel companies.
시험관
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
수험생
I like my school list on cell phone because this is is very convenient Ann. In. Rapidly.
평가
총점
Part 1
Do you make a list when you shop?
점수: 10.0제안: Câu trả lời của bạn thiếu sự rõ ràng và mạch lạc, cần trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi và sử dụng câu hoàn chỉnh. Hãy cố gắng trả lời ngắn gọn, rõ ràng và có cấu trúc hợp lý.
예시: Yes, I usually make a shopping list before I go to the store. It helps me remember what I need and saves time.
Do you make a list for your work? Does it work?
점수: 5.0제안: Câu trả lời không liên quan và không rõ ràng. Bạn nên trả lời trực tiếp câu hỏi, giải thích việc bạn có làm danh sách cho công việc hay không và hiệu quả của nó.
예시: Yes, I often make a to-do list for my work. It helps me stay organized and complete tasks efficiently.
Why don't some people like making lists?
점수: 10.0제안: Câu trả lời không rõ ràng và không giải thích được lý do. Bạn nên đưa ra lý do cụ thể và giải thích rõ ràng hơn.
예시: Some people don't like making lists because they find it boring or feel it limits their flexibility.
Do you prefer to make a list on paper or your phone?
점수: 40.0제안: Câu trả lời có ý tưởng nhưng cần diễn đạt rõ ràng hơn và tránh lỗi ngữ pháp. Hãy trả lời trực tiếp và giải thích lý do một cách mạch lạc.
예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because it is very convenient and I can quickly add or remove items anytime.
문법
× Only. Almost every year. The first is this happening. Lucy. Stop.
✓ Only almost every year. The first is this happening, Lucy. Stop.
The original sentence is fragmented and lacks proper sentence structure, making it difficult to understand. Combining fragments into coherent sentences improves clarity.
× I do not agree with my left. Blue Spanish. Oh. My my. Highly weather.
✓ I do not agree with my list. Blue Spanish. Oh my, my. Highly weather.
The sentence contains unclear and fragmented phrases. 'Left' should be 'list' to make sense in context. The rest remains unclear but is kept as is due to lack of context.
× Because they feel companies.
✓ Because they feel uncomfortable making lists.
The original sentence is incomplete and unclear. Adding 'uncomfortable making lists' clarifies the reason why some people dislike making lists.
× I like my school list on cell phone because this is is very convenient Ann. In. Rapidly.
✓ I like my shopping list on my cell phone because it is very convenient and fast.
The original sentence has repeated words, unclear phrases, and incorrect word choice. Correcting 'school list' to 'shopping list' and fixing grammar improves clarity and correctness.
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