List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 你的回答有些语法错误和表达不自然，比如“didn't forgot”应为“don't forget”。建议简洁明了地回答问题，避免重复和语法错误。可以用简单句表达清楚观点，并补充具体细节。

예시: Yes, I always make a shopping list before I go out. It helps me stay organized and ensures I don't forget important items.

제안: 回答中有多处语法和表达错误，句子不连贯，影响理解。建议使用正确时态和句子结构，清晰表达计划和优先级的重要性。

예시: Yes, every morning I make a daily plan and follow it strictly. I prioritize my tasks so that everything goes smoothly and efficiently.

제안: 回答不够清晰，表达混乱，且使用了专业术语但未解释。建议用简单明了的语言解释原因，并避免使用难懂的术语。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they prefer to be spontaneous and flexible, rather than planning everything in advance.

제안: 回答中有发音和拼写错误，如“leash”应为“list”，表达不完整。建议完整表达观点，使用正确词汇，并说明具体原因。

예시: I prefer making lists on my phone because it is very convenient. I use apps like Notes or Reminders, so I can check my list anytime and anywhere.

× You know that make me organized and.

✓ You know that makes me organized.

The verb 'make' should be in the third person singular form 'makes' to agree with the singular subject 'that'. Also, the sentence was incomplete and needed to end properly.

× Uhm, didn't forgot anything to buy like something important.

✓ Uhm, didn't forget anything to buy, like something important.

After 'didn't', the base form of the verb should be used, so 'forgot' should be corrected to 'forget'.

× Absolutely, you know, every morning I made my everydays plan and follow edge strictly.

✓ Absolutely, you know, every morning I make my everyday plan and follow it strictly.

The action happens every morning, so present tense 'make' is appropriate. 'Everydays' should be 'everyday' as an adjective. 'Follow edge' is incorrect; it should be 'follow it'.

× You know like am I? I made it by the priority.

✓ You know, like, am I? I make it by priority.

The sentence is unclear and contains pronoun misuse. 'Made' should be 'make' to match present tense. 'By the priority' should be 'by priority'.

× So everything go on the normal way and it makes me really fact.

✓ So everything goes on the normal way and it makes me really fast.

The verb 'go' should be 'goes' to agree with singular subject 'everything'. 'Fact' seems to be a typo and should be 'fast' or another appropriate word.

× Well, I get there are many factors that make contribution to this indeed phenomena top my head I would say that maybe they are the peoples you know in the MBTI there called perceiving person outside to the J person, you know judging person.

✓ Well, I think there are many factors that contribute to this phenomenon. Off the top of my head, I would say that maybe they are the people, you know, in the MBTI, they are called perceiving persons as opposed to the J persons, you know, judging persons.

The original sentence has multiple errors including incorrect prepositions ('make contribution to' should be 'contribute to'), plural forms ('peoples' should be 'people'), and unclear phrasing. The correction clarifies and corrects these issues.

× So I believe that's a didn't.

✓ So I believe that's it.

The phrase 'that's a didn't' is incorrect and unclear. It should be 'that's it' to convey the intended meaning.

× Personally speaking, make a leash on my phone is always my top priority.

✓ Personally speaking, making a list on my phone is always my top priority.

'Make a leash' is incorrect; it should be 'making a list'. The gerund form 'making' is appropriate here.

× The chief reason for the indeed affected that it really convenient.

✓ The chief reason for this is indeed that it is really convenient.

The original sentence is ungrammatical and unclear. 'Indeed affected' is incorrect; it should be 'indeed that'. Also, 'it really convenient' needs the verb 'is'.

× You know I always use the app card knows or reminders to make my plan and I can check to anytime and anywhere.

✓ You know, I always use apps like Notes or Reminders to make my plan, and I can check it anytime and anywhere.

'App card knows' is incorrect; it should be 'apps like Notes'. 'Check to' is incorrect; it should be 'check it'. Also, punctuation and conjunctions are improved for clarity.