List— Part 1 채점 보고서

제안: 回答中存在语法错误和表达不自然的问题，例如“a plan a shopping list”和“becauses”。建议注意句子结构的完整性和连贯性，避免断句不当。可以使用连接词如“because”来更好地表达因果关系。

예시: Yes, of course. I always make a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and avoid unnecessary purchases. Moreover, it saves me a lot of time when I shop.

제안: 回答中语法错误较多，如“help me organized”和“each. Exception”表达不清晰。建议使用正确的时态和词形变化，并且句子要完整，避免断句。可以用连接词如“because”或“so that”来说明原因和目的。

예시: Yes, I prefer to make a list before I start work or study because it helps me stay organized and clearly shows the deadline for each task.

제안: 回答表达不够连贯，句子结构简单且有语法错误，如“It's not free for them to do their own works”。建议使用更自然的表达方式，避免重复，并用连接词使句子更流畅。

예시: Some people don't like making lists because they believe they can manage tasks on their own. They may feel that planning limits their freedom to work in their own way.

제안: 回答中有严重语法和表达错误，如“All I pray for do it”和“On paper I I could easy to”，句子不完整且不连贯。建议练习基本句型，确保句子完整且逻辑清晰。

예시: I prefer to make lists on my phone because I can set alarms and receive reminders. It helps me remember everything easily, unlike paper lists which can be lost or forgotten.

× I always make a plan a shopping list becauses it helps me stay organized and avoid unnecessary. Purchases.

✓ I always make a plan or a shopping list because it helps me stay organized and avoid unnecessary purchases.

这里“a plan a shopping list”缺少连接词，应使用“or”连接两个名词短语，表示“计划或购物清单”。另外，“becauses”拼写错误，应为“because”。“unnecessary.”和“Purchases.”之间不应有句号，应连写为“unnecessary purchases”。

× Yes, before I work or study I prefer to make a list before it can help me organized and it's very clear to show my deadline for each. Exception.

✓ Yes, before I work or study, I prefer to make a list because it can help me stay organized and it's very clear to show my deadline for each task.

句中“before it can help me organized”中“before”用法不当，应改为“because”表示原因；“organized”应为形容词“organized”前加动词“stay”或“be”构成短语；“each. Exception”应为“each task”，原句“Exception”用词错误。

× Because they think they can do the task by themselves. They don't want to make a plan to organize their time, they think. It's not free for them to do their own works.

✓ Because they think they can do the tasks by themselves. They don't want to make a plan to organize their time; they think it's not convenient for them to do their own work.

“the task”应为复数“the tasks”，与上下文一致；“they think.”后应使用分号或连接词连接句子；“It's not free for them”表达不准确，应改为“it's not convenient for them”；“works”应为不可数名词“work”。

× All I pray for do it on my phone because I can set a alarm for me.

✓ I prefer to do it on my phone because I can set an alarm for myself.

“All I pray for do it”表达不正确，应为“I prefer to do it”；“a alarm”前应使用“an”因为alarm以元音音素开头；“for me”改为“for myself”更符合习惯用法。

× And it can remind me all the things by sending a message or. There are some songs.

✓ And it can remind me of all the things by sending a message or playing some songs.

“remind me all the things”缺少介词“of”；“or. There are some songs.”句子断裂，应合并为“or playing some songs”。

× On paper I I could easy to.

✓ On paper, I can easily do it.

原句结构混乱，“I I”重复且“could easy to”不符合语法，应改为“I can easily do it”，表达清晰且语法正确。